going to a party - 1. going to a party

So you know I'll expect more poetry as well as stories don't you. Well done Cole

You captured the feeling with only a few words. I can relate. Well done.

strong style. precise. direct. emotive. nice job. thanks for sharing.

On 05/02/2014 05:34 AM, joann414 said:

So you know I'll expect more poetry as well as stories don't you. Well done Cole

On 05/02/2014 05:53 AM, aditus said:

You captured the feeling with only a few words. I can relate. Well done.

On 05/02/2014 06:15 AM, carringtonrj said:

strong style. precise. direct. emotive. nice job. thanks for sharing.

Feels the thunder, but be not afraid.

On 05/02/2014 07:03 AM, Ashi said:

Feels the thunder, but be not afraid.

And I used to like going to parties. The emotions you conveyed showed me the flip side of that coin.

On 05/02/2014 11:09 AM, Bill W said:

And I used to like going to parties. The emotions you conveyed showed me the flip side of that coin.

On 05/02/2014 02:02 PM, Valkyrie said:

I definitely relate to this, especially the description of the loud voices. You conveyed the feeling of social anxiety quite well. Thanks for sharing.

What? leaving me hanging there?

On 05/02/2014 02:33 PM, nostic said:

What? leaving me hanging there?

For me parties are just another stage, for the persona in this poem it is a personal hell. Never expected someone to feel that way. Nicely handled Cole.

On 05/04/2014 01:15 PM, comicfan said:

For me parties are just another stage, for the persona in this poem it is a personal hell. Never expected someone to feel that way. Nicely handled Cole.