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going to a party - 1. going to a party

Dedicated to those who have social anxiety. You are not alone.

the black anvil nears

white hot sparks threaten

 

too loud voices taunt me

torrents on a steel roof

 

the howling wind mocks me

laughter of contempt

 

my stomach twists

acid boiling

 

Waiting hurts

Ice. Cold. Terror.

Thanks to Aditus for the help and support.
Copyright © 2014 Cole Matthews; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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Cole Matthews
On 05/02/2014 05:34 AM, joann414 said:
So you know I'll expect more poetry as well as stories don't you. Well done Cole :great:
Thanks Jo ann! I keep getting myself in deeper but i love it.
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Cole Matthews
On 05/02/2014 05:53 AM, aditus said:
You captured the feeling with only a few words. I can relate. Well done.
Thanks so much Addy for all your help. You gave me the courage to try!
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Cole Matthews
On 05/02/2014 06:15 AM, carringtonrj said:
strong style. precise. direct. emotive. nice job. thanks for sharing.
Thank you. Its my first attempt. It was fun. :)
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Cole Matthews
On 05/02/2014 07:03 AM, Ashi said:
Feels the thunder, but be not afraid.
Thanks for the review. :) yeah, if only he could do that!
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Bill W

And I used to like going to parties. The emotions you conveyed showed me the flip side of that coin.

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Cole Matthews
On 05/02/2014 11:09 AM, Bill W said:
And I used to like going to parties. The emotions you conveyed showed me the flip side of that coin.
Thanks for the review Bill! So glad the sentiment came through clearly! :)
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Valkyrie
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I definitely relate to this, especially the description of the loud voices. You conveyed the feeling of social anxiety quite well. Thanks for sharing.

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Cole Matthews
On 05/02/2014 02:02 PM, Valkyrie said:
I definitely relate to this, especially the description of the loud voices. You conveyed the feeling of social anxiety quite well. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you. I concur. *big hug* for you. :)
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Cole Matthews
On 05/02/2014 02:33 PM, nostic said:

What? :o leaving me hanging there?

Check out chapter 2 of 1550 Loring Lane. The story resides there. I hope you see some resolve there. It's based on him. Thank you for your review. It is appreciated.
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comicfan

For me parties are just another stage, for the persona in this poem it is a personal hell. Never expected someone to feel that way. Nicely handled Cole.

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On 05/04/2014 01:15 PM, comicfan said:
For me parties are just another stage, for the persona in this poem it is a personal hell. Never expected someone to feel that way. Nicely handled Cole.
Thanks so much comic fan! This means a lot. :)
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