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Double Take

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Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama


A short story about a father who is noticing something about his son that he didn't quite realize before. The big question being...what do I do now?

Just something short and sweet to hopefully make you feel good!  

Copyright © 2019 Comicality; All Rights Reserved.
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  • 05/18/2019 (Updated: 05/18/2019)
  • 1 Chapters
  • 3,169 Words
  • Teen
  • Complete

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  • Action Packed 0
  • Addictive/Pacing 1
  • Characters 1
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 1
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 0
  • World Building 0

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   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

It's always a pleasure to review a story written by @Comicality. The author describes it as a short story to make you feel good and that's exactly what it does. No one deserves a Father's Day card more than Aiden's dad.

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D.K. Daniels

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

If you like candy and perhaps plenty of cavities this story is for you. Overall, a lovely short read about a young boy and father at the mall picking out new clothes. However, the dad recognizes his sons' anxiousness and pent up infatuation as he learns new aspects about his son, and reflects on them. Well worth a read :)

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