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Poetry Fail - 2. # 2

I feel like I am bound to misery
Nothing can free me
No compliment can penetrate
No praise can be given its proper value

No touch will soothe the ache
No emotion can stitch the wound
No love can reach what has already been boarded up
forgotten
unwanted
untouchable

Regrets are built on the missed opportunities of another's grace.

If my future is created from my history, then I look forward to more of the same.

Forever alone.
Even when not alone.

Notice...

...and take heed of those unnoticed in the background.

Copyright © 2011 Comicality; All Rights Reserved.
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and you said you couldn't write poetry.

 

remind me to call you a liar later.

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This was powerful and relatable. Really well written. Though it's free verse, there is a flow to this and it's your word placement also adds to the impact.
Great poem.

 

tim

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I have to agree with these all. It's really powerful and form you with big words(:P). I liked it very much. Really a great poem Comsie... :heart:

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