Murmers at the Dusk of Day - 1. Dream Lover

Very moving Unc, and so very well done thank you

On 04/20/2013 01:10 AM, Mark92 said:

Very moving Unc, and so very well done thank you

I am out of likes but that is ok because I looooooved it. Great work Wayne!!!!!

You really work well with words here. I like how each verse ends. You throw up lots of interesting ideas. A well-worked piece. Thanks for sharing.

On 04/20/2013 04:27 AM, carringtonrj said:

You really work well with words here. I like how each verse ends. You throw up lots of interesting ideas. A well-worked piece. Thanks for sharing.

This was reflexive and interesting piece. Lust is strong and powerful, but it doesn't last. Only love in the waking world does

Those last four lines were the most powerful of the poem for me, really pulling the whole thing together and driving the point home. Great job.

On 04/20/2013 07:23 AM, W_L said:

This was reflexive and interesting piece. Lust is strong and powerful, but it doesn't last. Only love in the waking world does

On 04/20/2013 08:01 AM, layla said:

Those last four lines were the most powerful of the poem for me, really pulling the whole thing together and driving the point home. Great job.

I have already ran out of Likes .... This soooo needs a like. If I had a dream lovver like that, I would never get out bed again. Buy black-out shades and keep him in bed.

Great Job Wayne

On 04/21/2013 03:15 AM, K.C. said:

I have already ran out of Likes .... This soooo needs a like. If I had a dream lovver like that, I would never get out bed again. Buy black-out shades and keep him in bed.

Great Job Wayne

On 04/21/2013 03:15 AM, K.C. said:

I have already ran out of Likes .... This soooo needs a like. If I had a dream lovver like that, I would never get out bed again. Buy black-out shades and keep him in bed.

Great Job Wayne

Very raw and heated. And raw. Raw is the word I keep going back to. This poem is both very visually and lyrically moving, and left my heart beating a little bit faster. Great work, Wayne

On 04/21/2013 01:42 PM, Mikie said:

Very raw and heated. And raw. Raw is the word I keep going back to. This poem is both very visually and lyrically moving, and left my heart beating a little bit faster. Great work, Wayne

On 04/21/2013 01:42 PM, Mikie said:

Very raw and heated. And raw. Raw is the word I keep going back to. This poem is both very visually and lyrically moving, and left my heart beating a little bit faster. Great work, Wayne