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    Emi GS
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2016 - Fall - Blindsided / The Forgotten Entry

Poetry Saga FA2016 - 3. Poem 3: Cinquain Pack - Instead

strong>Cinquian became my favorite form these days. I hope you will enjoy them.

Instead


Blindside

those moments of

ignorance and anger;

to know the actual fact of

Caring.

 

Forget

those bad-mouthing

and insults thrown by both;

to find the factual joy of

Flirting.

 

Forgive

those mistakes and

those necessary faults;

to discover the meaning of

True Love.

strong>:thankyou:  to SkinnyD and AC Benus for their valuable suggestions for my poetry. :thankyou:  all for reading my poetry. And don't forget to leave a review. I Love to hear what you think.:D
Copyright © 2016 Emi GS; All Rights Reserved.
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Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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2016 - Fall - Blindsided / The Forgotten Entry
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What a great grouping. Maybe of the three, forgiveness is the most important and most difficult to do. Nice buddy.

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I like them. I'll let Parker speak to their attributes as Cinquain, but I'll say I like the 'flirting' poem the best. It's interesting, combining taunts (presumably anti-gay ones) with the notion of flirting as a tool to combat it. It reminds me of things I've read in Quentin Crisp's autobiography.

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On 11/11/2016 02:04 PM, Mikiesboy said:

What a great grouping. Maybe of the three, forgiveness is the most important and most difficult to do. Nice buddy.

You are right Tim. I got bummed up at that too. But when you set your mind clear and think proper, it might look easy. Thanks buddy, for the review and for the compliment.

 

~Emi.

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On 11/11/2016 02:50 PM, AC Benus said:

I like them. I'll let Parker speak to their attributes as Cinquain, but I'll say I like the 'flirting' poem the best. It's interesting, combining taunts (presumably anti-gay ones) with the notion of flirting as a tool to combat it. It reminds me of things I've read in Quentin Crisp's autobiography.

Flirting is my favourite part of this pack too Ben. Those moments of a couple are so precious. You comments always makes me smile with pride. Thank you for that and thank you for the review.

 

~Emi.

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On 11/12/2016 02:32 PM, Headstall said:

These belonged together, Emi, and they were in the right order... well done...

Thank you Gary. Thanks for the compliment and the review... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 11/15/2016 03:49 PM, Lisa said:

I agree with Tim. Forgiveness is my favorite, and it's also so hard to to.

I couldn't agree more than Tim, Lisa. And I appreciate your efforts and the review. Thank you for that... :)

 

~Emi.

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