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Chrisis Eve

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Darren is in a crisis on Christmas Eve. His pain is unbearable and he only wants one thing... peace... peace from the memories of another Christmas Eve that has haunted him for two years. It there someone or something that can help him find it?

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  • Action Packed 2
  • Addictive/Pacing 2
  • Characters 3
  • Chills 2
  • Cliffhanger 1
  • Compelling 3
  • Feel-Good 3
  • Humor 2
  • Smoldering 1
  • Tearjerker 2
  • Unique 3
  • World Building 2

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  • Love 6
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   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Now how in the 7 hells did miss writing this Review:blink:

As always a perfect written story and another good of example of Gary's powerful story telling and the colorful  Gary magic at it best. I am sure you will just love Santa. I am sure you will love this story! Give it a go and see if I am wrong:yes:

Response from the author:

Thanks, Albert. Your support is very kind. Weaving this story was fun, and was a good lesson in letting my imagination fly. So glad you like it, and recommend it with such nice words. Cheers! :hug: 

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   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

This is a magical tale of love winning in the end. 


The use of Santa bringing the men together is wonderful and just adds to the Christmas feel of the story.  


A heartwarming well-written read. 

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   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

This is a beautifully crafted and well written story about a magical Christmas. The sad beginning has you fearing the worst for Dares (Darren) but hope comes from a most unlikely source. When you read it, like me, you will almost believe in Santa again like when you were little. It's a great feel good story that should be read by all.

Response from the author:

Thanks, Mancunian! This review has brought me back to an important milestone in my writing journey. It's amazing what the mind comes up with when we gain the confidence to free it. Proud of this little story, even with its technical flaws, and just enjoyed rereading it again. Christmas is a time of magic and wonder, and this work is about that. Appreciate the kind support. Cheers! 

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   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

How do you write a Christmas story with two creepy, possibly insane Santa Clauses, a young man intent on suicide, an evil step father who would do the Grimm Brothers proud and a desperate man trying to find a lost love???? You'll just have to read this Christmas story by Headstall, one of GA's finest writers to find out.  He takes you from desperation and depression to the heights of Christmas spirits in this wonderful tale of hope and love.  It left me singing "Let It Snow, Let It Snow, Let It Snow!", feeling warm and fuzzy. Merry Christmas!🎅🎅🎅

Response from the author:

Thanks, raven! It is so nice to get a second review on this little story of mine. I've always hoped it would reach more readers than it has. You sum up the story well... my Santas are... strange... at the least. :)  I'd never written anything remotely like this before, and I'm very proud of it, so thank you so much for recommending it to others. It is the right time of year for it. :D  Cheers!

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