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Genres: General Fiction,
Sub-genres: Slice of Life

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Some choices are within our control, while some are not. Life is about acceptance and balance... and living with consequences as we look forward and back.  

Thanks for reading the poetic musings of a starkly simple man....
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  • 04/16/2026 (Updated: 04/16/2026)
  • 1 Chapters
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  • Great Characters 1
  • Immersive World 2
  • Fresh / Original 5
  • Counldn't Put It Down 6
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  • Funny 1
  • Feel-Good 2
  • Emotional Impact 3
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Albert1434

Albert1434 201,238

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

These three poems form a quiet arc of a life — from the innocence of boyhood, through the ache of adult regret, to the tempered clarity of hard‑won wisdom. Each piece stands on its own, yet together they read like chapters of the same inner autobiography.

“Within” is tender without ever becoming saccharine. It captures the sacredness of childhood friendship with a precision that feels lived rather than imagined. The imagery — blue‑stained lips, dragonflies, ragweed swords — is vivid enough to summon memory even in readers who never lived such a summer. Beneath the playfulness runs a subtle emotional current: the dawning awareness of love in its earliest, purest form. The final stanza lands with quiet force, revealing that the meadow was not just a place, but a beginning.

“If Only” shifts into adulthood with a stark honesty that refuses to hide behind poetic flourish. The speaker confronts cowardice, loss, and the self‑deceptions that feel noble in the moment but hollow in hindsight. The poem’s strength lies in its restraint — no melodrama, just the steady, painful accounting of choices not taken. The repeated “if only” becomes a tolling bell, marking the distance between what was possible and what remains.

“Lessons” is the distilled voice of someone who has lived long enough to understand that wisdom rarely arrives gently. The haiku‑like structure suits the content: brief flashes of truth, each one earned. The poem acknowledges darkness, hope, pride, and humility with the simplicity of someone who has stopped performing for the world and started speaking plainly.

Taken together, these poems reveal a writer unafraid to look backward, unafraid to admit fault, and unafraid to name beauty where it once lived. They are intimate without being confessional, emotional without being indulgent, and honest in a way that lingers.

 

 

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Doha

Doha 23,261

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

A thoughtful and moving collection that reflects on youth, love, and the lessons that shape us over time. The imagery is vivid and grounded, drawing the reader into moments that feel both personal and universal. It leaves a gentle but lasting sense of reflection and emotional truth. Beautifully and sensitively written, these poems tell the stories of many men trying to make sense of life.

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