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Picking up the Pieces

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Ryan is fourteen, soon to be fifteen. He hasn't had a very happy life and now events bring things to a head.

Can he pick up the pieces or will they remain shattered?

The story contains mention of possible suicide and death. If you would be upset to read about such things, this story is not for you.
Copyright © 2024 Ivor Slipper; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (5 members)

  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 1
  • Characters 5
  • Chills 1
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 5
  • Feel-Good 2
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 3
  • Unique 2
  • World Building 0

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  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 4,505 Words
    • 1,873 Views
    • 28 Comments
  • 2. Chapter 2
    • 6,344 Words
    • 1,243 Views
    • 24 Comments

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flesco

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

A very touching  story about a young man who  has had a tough  life. He has experienced death and loss, bullying and abuse, and he has reached  a point where he feels he cannot go on. He experiences  contact of a spiritual nature. What choices will he make? I highly recommend this  story. 😀 

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Thanks for taking the trouble to review @flesco. Glad you enjoyed the story.

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Geron Kees

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

Another story with a twist from an author who likes to make his characters work a little for a satisfying ending. No spoilers here, just read it! :)

 

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All  play and no work isn't good for the character! 

Thanks for the Review.

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Gary L

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

A bullied teenager finds happiness but with a supernatural twist.  A well thought out little gem, which very nicely written.  Recommended.

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Thanks @Gary L. Appreciate you taking the time to do this.

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chris191070

· Edited by chris191070

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

This is a great story if you have a spare half hour and fancy a quick read.

We read the story of Ryan who hasn't had a happy life. Let's join him in his adventures to pick up the pieces and try and find himself a happier life.

Response from the author:

Thanks @chris191070. Appreciate you taking the time to do this.

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Cane23

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

With both parents' dead, bullied at school, desperate and tired of life injustices, Ryan decides to end all the suffering. But when it seemed that he is on the one-way road, the ghost of his late father appears and shows him two short videos of future that might happen. What will Ryan do with this information? Is it possible to change destiny? Is he going to get his HEA?

Read this amazing little story and find out...

Response from the author:

Thanks for the review @Cane23. Glad you enjoyed the story enough to do this.

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