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Peanut Butter

   (5 reviews)
Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Prompt, Coming of Age

A short story inspired by Prompt 158.

PT #158 - Begin and end a vignette with a reference to food: like a slice of cheesecake slathered with cherries; a beer that conjures up a distant memory; or a hated, despised sandwich that sets off a series of events.  Make sure the food both evokes the scene and finishes it as well.
Copyright © 2023 Ivor Slipper; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (5 members)

  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 2
  • Characters 5
  • Chills 1
  • Cliffhanger 1
  • Compelling 4
  • Feel-Good 5
  • Humor 4
  • Smoldering 4
  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 4
  • World Building 3
  • Like 6
  • Love 3
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Table of Contents
  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 5,829 Words
    • 1,220 Views
    • 21 Comments

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Headstall

Headstall 299,569

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

Lots of fun, whether you like peanut butter or not. A charming read, it's worth the time it takes to 'consume'. :) 

Response from the author:

One you can sit and read in the time it takes to eat a pb&j sandwich.

  • Like 1
  • Haha 5
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drsawzall

drsawzall 44,594

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

Thought you knew peanut butter?? this is a fun little read!!

Response from the author:

It was intended to be a slightly nutty story, so glad it succeeded.

  • Like 3
  • Haha 2
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Geron Kees

Geron Kees 46,735

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

A small tale, a short tale, a buttery tale, and a fun tale!

Creamy or nutty, take your pick!

Response from the author:

Quite a lot packed into one little jar!

  • Like 3
  • Love 2
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chris191070

chris191070 93,033

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

A fantastic short story that will make you feel like a teenager all over again.

 

Response from the author:

Especially if you like buttercream!

  • Like 3
  • Love 2
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raven1

raven1 66,915

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

Another fun short story of teen lust and escapades by a master.  It only takes a short read and leaves you feeling like a lusty teen.

Response from the author:

Are you trying to butter me up @raven1?😀

  • Love 4
  • Haha 1
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