Quiet House - 1. Quiet House

Very lovely and romantic girl! I loved it!

You include some vivid, precise details here. A nice job. Thanks for sharing.

On 04/20/2013 06:09 AM, carringtonrj said:

You include some vivid, precise details here. A nice job. Thanks for sharing.

On 04/20/2013 04:05 AM, joann414 said:

Very lovely and romantic girl! I loved it!

Krista you show a soft and almost vulnerable side here. The images you create are sharp, vivid, and easily lead the reader from beginning to end.

I highly enjoy the softer side of Krista xD but really, it's a great poem that expresses strong feelings between two lovers.

A very Visceral experience of senses, quite enjoyable

Loved the way you used sensory images, this was beautiful and touching and romantic. I enjoyed it a great deal.

There is seduction in dark shadows dancing in candle light.

There is lust in the quiet whispers in your ear.

There is passion in your gentle touch.

There is yearning in your skin.

This is a sultry, wooing for the reader, a tantalising tease of pleasure.

Romance and allure written in black ink!

On 04/20/2013 08:55 AM, Yettie One said:

There is seduction in dark shadows dancing in candle light.

There is lust in the quiet whispers in your ear.

There is passion in your gentle touch.

There is yearning in your skin.

 

This is a sultry, wooing for the reader, a tantalising tease of pleasure.

Romance and allure written in black ink!

On 04/20/2013 08:28 AM, layla said:

Loved the way you used sensory images, this was beautiful and touching and romantic. I enjoyed it a great deal.

On 04/20/2013 08:05 AM, W_L said:

A very Visceral experience of senses, quite enjoyable

On 04/20/2013 07:35 AM, WatchPatRun said:

I highly enjoy the softer side of Krista xD but really, it's a great poem that expresses strong feelings between two lovers.

On 04/20/2013 07:23 AM, comicfan said:

Krista you show a soft and almost vulnerable side here. The images you create are sharp, vivid, and easily lead the reader from beginning to end.

Romantic, clear, and clever. I loved the ending line and how blatantly beautiful the emotions of the protagonist come out in the verses. Great work Krista!

Cleverly sexy. Sweet read:).

On 04/20/2013 01:54 PM, Luc Rosen said:

Romantic, clear, and clever. I loved the ending line and how blatantly beautiful the emotions of the protagonist come out in the verses. Great work Krista!

On 04/20/2013 04:10 PM, Michael9344 said:

Cleverly sexy. Sweet read:).

I like it Krista. This is poetry I get

Romantic, and portrays true affection between partners.

Thanks for sharing.

On 04/21/2013 03:26 AM, Andy78 said:

I like it Krista. This is poetry I get

Romantic, and portrays true affection between partners.

Thanks for sharing.

Hmmmmmm very sexy Feel like a voyeur watching a romatic moment

Very romantic and yet somehow haunting. I enjoyed this very much Much more vulnerable than I would expect from you, in a good way

On 04/21/2013 07:40 AM, K.C. said:

Hmmmmmm very sexy Feel like a voyeur watching a romatic moment

On 04/21/2013 01:30 PM, Mikie said:

Very romantic and yet somehow haunting. I enjoyed this very much Much more vulnerable than I would expect from you, in a good way