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Sneak Away Part 5

   (4 reviews)
Genres: General Fiction, Romance,
Sub-genres: Coming of Age, Contemporary Romance

This was written as an entry in the 2025 Writing Event - Comicality Tribute - Coming of Age.

I hope it is well-received. I've read this partial story a few times now and have frequently lamented the loss of Comsie and all the unfinished stories that will never be complete. I obviously have no idea where Comsie planned on taking this story next, but I'd like to offer my suggestion. Comsie, wherever you are, I never really knew you, traded a couple comments, but I hope you're happy and you don't curse me for this.

Picking up where part 4 left off, there will obviously be underaged, teen boy sex.
FYI, it would be a good idea to read or re-read the first 4 chapters first.
 
So, without further fanfare, Sneak Away Part 5
Copyright © 2025 Lee Wilson; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (2 members)

  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 1
  • Characters 2
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 2
  • Humor 2
  • Smoldering 2
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 1
  • World Building 0
  • Like 1
  • Love 3
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    • 2,342 Words
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    • 17 Comments

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BendtedWreath

BendtedWreath 5,716

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Lee gave everyone who read this story a gift in bringing it to an ending that felt fitting. I really rooted for Seth and Adler and this chapter not disappoint. Thank you!

Response from the author:

Very glad is wasn't seen as a disappointment. I knew I was taking a chance with this, but it seems I did OK.

  • Love 2
Bill W

Bill W 61,506

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Comicality left this world way too early and far too young, and in the process left some of his stories unfinished.  Lee took one of those stories and attempted to bring it to some sort of a conclusion, and he did it in a charming and devilish way that I believe Comicality would have approved of.  I urge you to take a look at this short story and see if you agree with me.  

Response from the author:

Thanks. I really appreciate that folks think I did a good job.

  • Love 3
drsawzall

drsawzall 82,105

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

A wonderful tribute story in the best of the Comicality tradition, while it is difficult to pick up an unfinished story, and bring to a conclusion, in more than one way, this story does just that!!

Response from the author:

Thanks. I did look at a few of his unfinished stories; this and one that I later discovered was finished on nifty seemed the best ones to try. I really liked this one a lot and decided it would be my tribute.

  • Love 4
chris191070

chris191070 164,638

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

A wonderful tribute to Comicality.

Lee took one of Comicality unfinished story and brought it to a satisfactory conclusion, with some devilishment and charm.

He would have been so chuffed with this.

Response from the author:

Again, I’m glad I hit the mark on this and it’s being enjoyed.

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