Jump to content

  • Join Gay Authors

    Join us for free and follow your favorite authors and stories.

 Share

Footprints

There are currently no reviews.
Genres: Romance
Sub-genres: General Romance

This is a short story in two or three parts. Basil is an artist. A hermit. He's been hurt far too many times to count. Until he meets THE SWIMMER. An enigma that challenges his sanity.

em>This is the first part. I have deliberately used unconventional writing methods . You will find missing commas. sometimes missing periods and sentence run ons. This has been done in order to expound on Basil's mental state. I repeat, this is deliberate.  I really do know where the commas should be.  But apart from this, footprints is a story of wanting, of loss, and of hope.
The story is experimental and is written in second person present tense.  This is also deliberate as I want you, the reader, to experience it as though you are the main character.
Louis J Harris

Story Recommendations

  • Action Packed 0
  • Addictive/Pacing 0
  • Characters 0
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 0
  • World Building 0
  • Like 1
  • Fingers Crossed 1
Select Chapter
Table of Contents
  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 1,040 Words
    • 2,922 Views
    • 11 Comments
  • 2. Chapter 2
    • 797 Words
    • 1,539 Views
    • 10 Comments
  • 3. Chapter 3
    • 1,351 Words
    • 1,458 Views
    • 12 Comments
  • 4. Chapter 4
    • 2,074 Words
    • 1,103 Views
    • 7 Comments
  • 5. Chapter 5
    • 2,695 Words
    • 1,144 Views
    • 9 Comments
  • 6. Chapter 6
    • 904 Words
    • 1,085 Views
    • 10 Comments
  • 7. Chapter 7
    • 817 Words
    • 1,102 Views
    • 8 Comments
  • 8. Chapter 8
    • 1,621 Words
    • 1,193 Views
    • 7 Comments
  • 9. Chapter 9
    • 1,960 Words
    • 1,079 Views
    • 13 Comments

Recommended Comments

User Feedback

LJH
On 02/25/2014 09:06 AM, knotme said:
I wonder, must Basil paint, or does he fill his time painting mainly to avoid trying other things that might again hurt him? He may never paint again, but he has Will. You mentioned Will's upcoming reaction to seeing his portrait. After all that's transpired, I cannot image what that portrait could do now, but I don't think Will's seen it yet.
Will is a temperamental guy at heart. He loves the beauty in life and what happened in the sea that day, was the ugliest moment of his life. Save this little insight for the next chapter and be prepared to be wowed.
View Guidelines

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now

  • Newsletter

    Sign Up and get an occasional Newsletter.  Fill out your profile with favorite genres and say yes to genre news to get the monthly update for your favorite genres.

    Sign Up
×
×
  • Create New...