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Featured Story: So Little Magic Left


Okay, so I'm running a little late this morning! I love having the chance to feature stories by our talented authors at GA and today is no exception. Today we're bringing you a review that Comicfan did on "So Little Magic Left" by Promising Author: Mann Ramblings! If you haven't already checked out the story, hopefully by the end of the review you'll have a taste for it and want to go read more! Enjoy!


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Mann Ramblings

 

Reviewer: Comicfan
Status: In Process
Word Count: 44,593

 

Everyone has a time when they feel they don’t belong, that they can’t connect, and they would like to see some sort of change come to into their life. In his story, So Little Magic Left, Mann taps into these ideas and runs with them. Not only does he look at the world as it is, but what if no matter where you were, you would find misfits.

 

From the beginning of the story you are introduced to Shawn, an ex-marine who feels that he doesn’t quite fit into the world around him. He is a large intimating man with a Mohawk who doesn’t want to be part of the normal activities around him. Working in the local LGBT center he has come to the attention of Kenrick Balfour, a very wealthy man. Kenrick wants Shawn and isn’t about to let anything come between him and his conquest.

 

In an attempt to win over Shawn, Kenrick sets up an attack on the LGBT center. However, things don’t go as expected. Shawn comes upon the scene as three thugs begin to break into the center and finds himself attacked. His life would have ended if not for the introduction of another outcast, Rath. Just what does a half orc/half elf do with an ex-marine that he has made his pet? Just what does Rath’s servant Maertagh explain about Shawn’s new position? (You have to read the bath scene because it is just that good.)

 

Mann’s story is by no means finished, but it is a wonderful tale combining many themes and fantasy. If you are looking for something a little different, I highly recommend it.

 


As always, I'm looking for more reviews for the blog. I'm running just a tad bit low. If you're reading a story that you'd like to see featured on one of our Featured Story Monday's, please PM me.

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Mann Ramblings

Posted

ZOMG!! I didn't know this was being reviewed! :D

 

Thanks, Wayne! Things are just starting to get interesting and there's lots more to come. **doing a happy dance**

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joann414

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Love this story although I'm behind on my reading, but I've read enough to tell  you he has some very entertaining characters and an amazing plot as always.

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Aditus

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I'm so behind I didn't even get started yet. I have some serious reading to do during winter break me thinks.

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joann414

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U definitely need to read this one Aditus.  I even dreamed of the big guy in it, and thought of him as Van Diesel with hair. lol

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Slytherin

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Vin Diesel with hair :lol: Thank you Jo Ann, now that is all I'm gonna see when I read this story :lol:

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Aditus

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I might start reading a bit earlier now...

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