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Featured Story: From Behind Those Eyes


It's Monday again! Time for a new Featured Story Selection. Today, Tiger brings us one of his favorites, From Behind Those Eyes, by Viv. If you like stories about teenagers who play sports with a bit of angst about life and coming out -- well read on, this may be something you like. If not, well, it might surprise you, give it a try anyway.

 




review by Tiger

 

About a year after I joined GA, someone pointed out From Behind Those Eyes as a must-read story, and I am glad I read it. Recently, I decided to read the story once again. The story was a good read the first time around, and it wasn't long before I was enthralled by the story once again.

 

From Behind Those Eyes is about a high school senior, Stephen Cooper. Stephen is a classic example of a closeted gay teen who feels that he has much to lose by coming out of the closet. For one thing, he is the class president as well as the captain and pitcher for the school's baseball team.

 

The story begins with a school masquerade party, an event in the story from which the title is explained. Stephen has no idea who this young stranger is, but those beautiful eyes take his breath away. The two dance, and Stephen, for the first time, comes face to face with his own curiosity and his own fears at the very same time. Who is this young stranger? Well, he really doesn't know. He spends the next chapter or two trying to find the answer to that very question.

 

Finally, through the events of the story, he finds out the name of this fine blond-haired, blue-eyed beau, and the rest is history. What's to follow is a story of coming out, of accepting yourself and discovering the love and romance you've denied yourself of having for your whole life.

 

Stephen's boyfriend has his own secrets, and although he's out of the closet, he too struggles in a lot of ways. His outing was a very traumatic experience, and we soon discover that he needs Stephen just as much as Stephen needs him.

 

Just like real life, there are some people who are less than accepting, if not outright antagonistic, toward their relationship. Jeremy and Tim are the story's quintessential homophobic jocks, and our protagonists may end up getting hurt, both physically and mentally, by these homophobic jerks. Will their relationship survive the storms?

 

The dialogue is well-written except that toward the beginning, the author sometimes forgot to start a new paragraph when featuring dialogue from another character. However, I felt that this issue took away little from the story, and I was able to look past it.

 

How about the sex? The sex scenes are very romantic and the words flow very well. You won't find the characters going all the way any time soon, but you'll find that their bedroom romance progresses throughout the story as the characters discover their sexuality. Rightfully so, there is a factor of fear as the two experience a lot of firsts together.

 

What's the bottom line? I give the story, overall, a score of 4 out of 5. It's a must-read for any gay teen romance enthusiast. If you're looking for a story about coming out and about first time love, From Behind Those Eyes will deliver with plenty of laughs and tears along the way.

 

 

 

As usual, our featured story can be found pinned on the GA Stories Welcome page for the next week.

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Marzipan

Posted

One of my favourites too! *sigh*

Frostina

Posted

I read FBTE a long time before i joined GA. And till date its my feel good story. I've lost count of how many times i have read it! :P

 

Beautiful, romantic and definitely memorable! :)

 

ps: Wish Viv would write one more! :*)

Lugh

Posted

Don't forget to leave her some reviews! If you love it.... "LOVE" it!

Nephylim

Posted

I second what Frostina said. I wish Viv would write more. This is really a beautiful story, definitely of the feel good variety.

dkstories

Posted

I need to go back and read this one again. :) Gotta love baseball players.

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wildone

Posted

Viv's story was the one that made me realize that there was more than Dom.

 

:o

 

Yes, I said it.

 

Still one of my all time favourite stories I've read, published or unpublished. Motivated me enough to even stalk her (not really :P ) but enough to meet her.

 

If you think her story is amazing, she is even more amazing.

 

Thanks Viv :hug:

 

Thanks to Lugh and Tiger for bringing back the warm feelings that i get from the story too.

Frostina

Posted

I need to go back and read this one again. :) Gotta love baseball players.

 

Especially when his *hot* bf will be editing the articles written abt him... pitching in his pinstipe uniform! ;) ;)

 

God i love these boys!

viv

Posted

Umm, wow, you guys! Thanks so much! This was the first full length story I wrote, and I just love these guys. I had so much fun learning everything with them, from when to start a new paragraph to just how many options there actually are in a certain adult section at a store.

 

I know I haven't been writing much lately, and I could try and justify it by telling you that my entire life is falling apart right now, but the truth is that I need writing to keep me sane, so I'm going to make a better effort. I've had characters nudging at my brain for months now that I keep putting off, and my brain could use a little peace right about now.

 

It means everything to me that something I wrote did anybody any good, so really, thank you.

 

PS. Steve, you better come stalk me again soon!

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Marzipan

Posted

Great to hear you are still writing, Viv. I'm optimistic we'll be reading new stuff - short or long - from you soon! :D

 

Happy writing year 2012!

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