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Renee Stevens

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First off, I want to say thank you to everyone who responded to my plea for help! I appreciate the instant offers of assistance more than I can say! I received quite a few responses which will ensure that we will have reviews for a few of the upcoming Monday blogs. If you want to write a review for a story you have read, please PM me. Now, without further ado, let's look to our featured story!

 

Joann414 provides us with a review of the story Centaur, written by Carringtonrj. It's a short piece dedicated to the description of a character. Hope you enjoy in the imagery.

 



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Carringtonrj

 

Reviewer: Joann414
Status: Complete
Word Count: 1,065

 

Centaur is a beautiful, poetic piece about the mythical creature that keeps the reader in it's grip throughout the complete story. It flows effortlessly with the imagery and descriptive words that this author can write in a way that makes this man/horse so magnificent that you go looking for an actual image to put to the lovely description.

 

If a first time author needs something to teach them how to write great imagery or describe something or someone in a postive, deserving way that makes that character grab the readers attentnion then they definitely need to read Centaur. It is a very short piece that is warm, hot beautiful, dramatic and enthralling.

 

The first time I read it i knew that I would go back to read again just to make sure I caught all of the feeling that this author puts into his work and he puts massive amounts in everything he writes. If you had not read this, the it is a must read for new and seasoned authors.

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Wicked Witch

Wicked Witch 529

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This is a piece I'd never had read without this review, but I am glad I did. It is a very unusual piece, which I quite enjoyed reading. It creates a fantastical image of the myth and legend that is the centaur.

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carringtonrj

carringtonrj 231

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Thank you so much for your kind words, J. And thanks for putting them here, R.

Blushing! :)

Percy

Percy 955

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Thanks for highlighting this Joann. Beautiful and eloquent.

 

carrington, maybe you can write some fanfiction with Chiron as a character. (kidding)

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K.C.

K.C. 6,408

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This is one of my favorite stories! RJ is amazing! Thanks so much for reviewing this one, Joann :2thumbs:

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Andy78

Andy78 3,097

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A great review Joann.

 

I have to agree with KC, RJs stories are brilliant and a must read.

 

I must find more time to read.

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joann414

joann414 4,131

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You are so welcome all! 

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jkeele777

jkeele777 380

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I also would have missed out on this essay without seeing the review. I'm glad I was paying attention today! RJ, as always, well done. I have enjoyed your work for some tiem now, and hope to see much more from you.

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Yettie One

Yettie One 1,064

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RJ has a wonderfully expressive tone in his work. I've long enjoyed his stuff, but had missed this one. Thanks for pointing it out JoAnn. :D

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Fishwings

Fishwings 1,011

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WOW that was surprisingly wonderful. Thanks for the recommendation joann and great job RJ! Probably gonna check out the rest of your stuff now :D

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carringtonrj

carringtonrj 231

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I've run out of likes! Thank you so much for the lovely comments. :)

Ieshwar

Ieshwar 733

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I know I'm quite late. But still... ;)

 

Ever since I have read "Should i" by carringtonrj, I have been a real fan. Every story by RJ is a real gem. Even before opening "Centaur", I knew it would be great. But the weird part is that despite my high expectations, it still blew me away. It's amazing! Hats off, RJ. You are a star! ;)

 

And amazing review, Joann! Loved it. :)

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joann414

joann414 4,131

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over 300 views. you go rj:)

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