Beneath the Current is on my list to read.  I look forward to reading whatever else you come up with. 

I've read all of your stories at least once and loved each one of them. I think that I can safely predict that whatever you gift to your GA readers will be as well received as its predecessors. Just don't make us wait too long, okay?

So I just left a review of chapter five for Lies of the Serpent. I then when on to read Val's review because I like to see what other readers have to say.

Well didn't I get confused when she started referring to Wyatt's disappearance. I couldn't understand what that was all about. I mean, did I miss something that everyone else in the class knew about? Was I asleep at my desk? 

After looking around and finding your blog again as I searched for clues, it finally dawned on me to look at the synopsis of the story again. And there it was in black and white. I had forgotten about a major event that was an integral part of the story.

At first I thought the Serpent was Darrin. This chapter has altered my thinking to the Serpent likely being female and not male as I had originally assumed. Time and new chapters will tell me if I am correct.

In the end, forgetting what was going to happen turned out for the better, I think. It allowed me to be suspicious of the mother, but also had me feeling guilty for thinking such a thought in the first place 

I would leave it in as it indicates something suspenseful is going to happen.

I'm not sure why I forgot that Wyatt would go missing. I could hazard a guess  and say that having the earlier chapters portray mostly happy times for Bryan and Wyatt had me so caught up in the good times, I forgot that something bad was going to happen.