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asamvav111

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Somewhere on the other side of the rainbow, in a land far far away, there will be a tree. An old majestic tree it will be, with its red, green and purple leaves, and its ancient curved branches extending their embrace from one horizon to another, standing solemnly in an emerald valley beneath the starry night in a solitary prayer. Underneath that tree old mossy stones will hibernate while snuggling the roots that reach the deepest crevices of earth in search of the sweet moisture and warmth of the old world. Little critters will live amongst them. A single blossoming vine of unnamed untamed wild flower shall entwine the expansive trunk all the way reaching the lowest branches. Sweet fragrance of the moist earth mixed with the green perfume of the arbour will permeate the shaded ambiance. And when sudden breezes shall play through the tunnels of the foliage and crosshatching of the branches, it will sound the sonorous melody of the windpipes of Pan. And the filtered moonlight of the November Lune shall silver the dark mahogany of the bark. Together they will create an ethereal opera of sublime thrills.


Together we will meet under that tree… in another life. Promise.

 

 

 

22/07/16


©asamvav111

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Did you write this?  If so, I would encourage you to get author status and post it in a collection of your poetry.  It's amazing and brought tears to my eyes.  It reminds me of a meditation exercise that I did when I took yoga classes.  It was a very powerful and moving experience for me.  

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Emi GS

As Val said, its not some blog's matter to be left like that. Think about it. :)

 

I've always loved your poems. And the enchantment of them really touched my heart. Such a sad yet lovely poem... :)

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asamvav111

Did you write this?  If so, I would encourage you to get author status and post it in a collection of your poetry.  It's amazing and brought tears to my eyes.  It reminds me of a meditation exercise that I did when I took yoga classes.  It was a very powerful and moving experience for me.  

Thank you for your kind words. I don't like the tag author personally.

 

As Val said, its not some blog's matter to be left like that. Think about it. :) I've always loved your poems. And the enchantment of them really touched my heart. Such a sad yet lovely poem... :)

A lot of great writing is shared over blogs here in GA. It used to be a lot more. In any case I am happy to share my really occasional spew over here. Thank you for your love and encouragement.

Happiness to all.

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AC Benus

fyi, I posted a link to this poem in the Live-Poets thread. I hope more people stop by and leave you some feedback and likes. :)

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dughlas

In the moonlit shade of that tree all is peace all is well ... this is wonderful thank you for sharing it with us.

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