Christian000 Posted February 26, 2008 Posted February 26, 2008 If Only I Not Love ooh how I dearly hate the accursed creature that beats in my bosom how it sings to all creation how it adores all life how it bleeds two fold for every tear of another how I wish to carve from my flesh, from my dear soul, this monstrous immortal, which at every agonizing beat, pumps my flesh with perpetuating red love Why must I love those who hate me Why must I share the hate of my lovers Why must I be enticed to kiss those who sworn to kill me, those who have sworn me a horrific destiny OH! Poor eyes who suffer my heart's consequences OH! Poor body who must shelter a soul who loves yet hates himself OOH! Poor World, Poor God, Why! Why must you be burdened with all my pain, with all my hate, with all my Love!!!
Ieshwar Posted February 29, 2008 Posted February 29, 2008 Very nice concept! Love and hate. Loving without being able to control it... Nice! Take care, Ieshwar
AFriendlyFace Posted June 5, 2008 Posted June 5, 2008 How very 'Christian' (couldn't resist) I really like it! I think the feeling of wishing we didn't care because it hurts is something most, if not all, of us can identify with. It's very well done! Good job Kevin
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