Benji Posted August 30, 2008 Posted August 30, 2008 .....Great chapter Steve, tying things up nicely on the other characters, laying the foundation up for Julies silent exit. Joe coming to terms, not the greatest surprise, it was nice to know that he knew where to go for advice when he was troubled. However Cody's situation was totally left in the dark, the moody Cody playing solitaire in the park. The only clue, the panicked greeting from his mother, tends to give credence that Benjamin has disappeared from his families home. Perhaps in quest of Cody, otherwise a sly cliffhanger on the fate of Cody. Giving a bit, but not enough of Cody's whereabouts in the chapter, I feel an impending doom desending in the next chapter. BTW where's the F***ing vcheck??
shadowgod Posted August 30, 2008 Posted August 30, 2008 .....Great chapter Steve, tying things up nicely on the other characters, laying the foundation up for Julies silent exit. Joe coming to terms, not the greatest surprise, it was nice to know that he knew where to go for advice when he was troubled. However Cody's situation was totally left in the dark, the moody Cody playing solitaire in the park. The only clue, the panicked greeting from his mother, tends to give credence that Benjamin has disappeared from his families home. Perhaps in quest of Cody, otherwise a sly cliffhanger on the fate of Cody. Giving a bit, but not enough of Cody's whereabouts in the chapter, I feel an impending doom desending in the next chapter. BTW where's the F***ing vcheck?? hrmmm what was it you said in that PM? .... Hang in there I can assure at least one of those questions will be answered in 8 Which by the way is named Migratory Patterns. how well that name fits, well that will be seen soon. Yay i actually announced a chapter name in advance!
Tiger Posted August 30, 2008 Posted August 30, 2008 (edited) That means I'm about to get what I need. Edited August 30, 2008 by Tiger
C James Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 Yay i actually announced a chapter name in advance! Hrmmm? Announcing chapter names in advance? I would say that this means you are evil, but somehow, I have this sneaky feeling that it might backfire... At the risk of suffering the Echidna's wrath, I'll give a small spoiler for Dreams and Cliffed Wings 8, Migratory Patterns. (Being a beta reader for his Shadowyness has it's perks..): It is a really good chapter. Superb. Well worth the wait.
steph Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 Hrmmm? Announcing chapter names in advance? I would say that this means you are evil, but somehow, I have this sneaky feeling that it might backfire... maybe you can teach an old goat new tricks!
Tiger Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 Hrmmm? Announcing chapter names in advance? I would say that this means you are evil, but somehow, I have this sneaky feeling that it might backfire... You are such a bad influence on Steve. You announce the name of the chapter every week.
Benji Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 (edited) hrmmm what was it you said in that PM? .... Hang in there I can assure at least one of those questions will be answered in 8 Which by the way is named Migratory Patterns. how well that name fits, well that will be seen soon. Yay i actually announced a chapter name in advance! ....Ahem!, maybe you should have titled it the : 'Silence of the Check' Edited August 31, 2008 by Benji
shadowgod Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 ....Ahem!, maybe you should have titled it the : 'Silence of the Check' what does that have to do with flight?
Benji Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 (edited) what does that have to do with flight? ....'Flight' nothing, overdue check plenty.....Btw you did leave Cody in the dark in the last chapter!! That is so very close to cliffhanging if I ever saw!! Again, btw, it took me a couple of weeks before I was able to read your cliffhanger, sorry about the delay. Edited August 31, 2008 by Benji
shadowgod Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 ....'Flight' nothing, overdue check plenty.....Btw you did leave Cody in the dark in the last chapter!! That is so very close to cliffhanging if I ever saw!! Again, btw, it took me a couple of weeks before I was able to read your cliffhanger, sorry about the delay. Lol no problems, better for you as it wont seem such a long wait for eight.
Benji Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 Lol no problems, better for you as it wont seem such a long wait for eight. .........So true, that damn PC problem I was experiencing at work, the 'no longer show thing' kept me backlogged for weeks.
C James Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 ....'Flight' nothing, overdue check plenty.....Btw you did leave Cody in the dark in the last chapter!! That is so very close to cliffhanging if I ever saw!! Again, btw, it took me a couple of weeks before I was able to read your cliffhanger, sorry about the delay. ROFL!! Yes, I think His Shadowyness may have stolen the check.
shadowgod Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 Aren't you supposed to be gone?!? However, I will admit--and no one even thought to bring it up--Bound with Wax, Bound with Thread is a little foretelling...
Benji Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 Aren't you supposed to be gone?!? However, I will admit--and no one even thought to bring it up--Bound with Wax, Bound with Thread is a little foretelling... ......Just as I suspected the goats long awaited vacation has started, rumors have it that he plans to go thru San Francisco. I expect Cody maybe in danger, well probably the whole city, if he still has one of those earthquake producing bombs on him. Vacation hell! The goat is just mixing business with pleasure. Steve, I've warned you!
Tiger Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 Lol no problems, better for you as it wont seem such a long wait for eight. Yeah, I may have to read it again. :wacko:
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