In the City of Rust

[thatboyChase]

Let me know what you think, really.

 

More to come.

 

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[MikeL]

Chase strike again! It has been a while since he started a new story. This one paints a vivid, albeit bleak, picture of a city of the future. At least I think it is of the future. Chase's past stories have been populated with off beat characters, usually characters who were either villains or heroes, though it is often difficult to tell which. In chapter 1 of In the City of Rust, we barely meet any characters, much less get a feeling for which side of the villain/hero divide they fall on. I suspect that will change soon (and often).

[Nephylim]

I loved the descriptions in this story. The beginning was awesome. I felt like I was flying over the landscape towards the city and when I landed it wasn't a pleasant experience.

 

And then when we start to interract with the characters it was quite chilling.

 

I think that it's always hard to write a first chapter because it has to set the scene and there is usually a lot of description which can sometimes be boring. There is nothing about any of Chase's writing that can be termed 'boring'