The Chase

[VickyS]

Hi friends, I just posted my first story here, "The Chase".

 

[its based on my real life relationship with a friend. Have tried to capture the various aspects of the relationship, especially the emotional turmoil of a turbulent affair, the toll uncertainity takes, exploration of the physical intimacy aspect, the hesitation of a naive teenager, the joy of unexpectedly discovering one's growing feelings for that someone special.]

 

Hope you guys read it, I look forward to receiving your feedback, critical or complimentory, I wud really appreciate either.

 

Well this forum is about "discussion", so let me start off with something. Tell me what appealed to you about the story, or if its the case, what aspect you found repulsive?.

 

Also, what you expect from the rest of the story.

 

Thanks,

Vicky.