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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Clovis

Utterly brilliant! you really had me hooked. You put into words so well

what so many feel. Thanks. At first I thought, Uh oh, not another... and then it

became so good i couldn't stop. So many good things; this struck me forcibly:"

‘It’ being that life wasn’t the opposite of death, or rather, that death wasn’t

the opposite of life. They were/are the same thing. You don’t get one without

the other."

Date: 10/31/2010 01:54 AM

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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jamaica Kid

 

Thank you. With love... always and forever...

Date: 10/30/2010 10:16 PM

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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nephylim

 

Oh how beautiful. It was inspiring in a depressing kind of way. Not that it

was depressing at all really. It's wonderful, and warm and sad and melancholy. I

really like itAuthor's Response: Thank you, Nephylim. I thought of

you while writing the story. I hoped you'd enjoy it.

Date: 10/26/2010 05:10 PM

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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: bugeye

 

A very heartfelt, thoughtful story. Serious in conception. With playful tones

to ease the way. Life is two natured really, as you say Life/Death. The

experience folding our awareness between the two. Always knowing that death has

the final say. Very poignant and beautifully written.Author's

Response:

Thank you. I'm having second thoughts about the story... just that it's a

bit... uh... well, not tight. Still, there are parts I'm proud of.

Anyway, thank you for reading and responding so quickly!

Date: 10/26/2010 02:55 AM

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