BillM Posted February 20, 2004 Posted February 20, 2004 Harry Potter and the Rising of the Dark Review Author: MeTA4 Link: http://www.meta4.org/home/?url=http://www..../meta4/hpatrotd Story Code: tt: Oral, Anal Description in Archive: A rather wayward teen ends up at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Given his background and demeanor, he couldn't be further from your average Wizard and, as it turns out, for good reason... Eroticism: 7 Character Development: 8 Strength of Story: 8 Overall Quality: 7.5 This story is told by a boy named Liam, who describes himself at the start of the story as
BillM Posted February 23, 2004 Author Posted February 23, 2004 New chapters out! Man I love this story
miguelsanchez55 Posted March 2, 2004 Posted March 2, 2004 I read this story and I agree with BM that this is an excellent story but I give it an 8.5 across the board. It holds my interest and is very well written. I can't wait for the other chapters to come out. Liam and Harry seem to have really hit it off. I can't wait to see how Draco's father is going to take to his son's new look. Take care Mike :sword:
rainbow Posted March 5, 2004 Posted March 5, 2004 Has I have read the all original books, other then the addition of new characters, I would be hard press to tell wether this story was not written by the author of the Harry Potter story. I will be interest to see how the story develop. Rainbow
boy on a string Posted March 21, 2004 Posted March 21, 2004 While I like this story, the plot is starting to drag. The last two chapters have been 99% sex, and it seems like half the story is sex which is a shame because the plot is suffering. I do believe that there are places where the sex fits into a story, but most of the time it destroys a good story. This was the case with POD, until Myr re-wrote it. Boy on a String
BillM Posted March 22, 2004 Author Posted March 22, 2004 Maybe the author is really horny at the moment
ethan thorn Posted July 27, 2004 Posted July 27, 2004 this is one hell of a story to bad there was only 16 ch. at this time i wanted more the idea of the dark something more pwoerfull then anything harry has faced yet and the kidnapping of dumbledore and collin was a nice touch i did not find to much sex in it and bob being merlin nice touch to waiting to read the next ch. as soon as it is posted.
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