DarkShadow Posted November 25, 2006 Share Posted November 25, 2006 It's here! https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewsto...5&chapter=3 Hope you like! Please place comments and criticisms here. Thanks! Link to comment
DarkShadow Posted November 25, 2006 Author Share Posted November 25, 2006 FABULOUS (: Birds Thank you my feathered friend Now... heheh I've been a busy bee. The Lycan is born! Link to comment
C James Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 This story is really developing! Asher is still a mystery. What are his intentions? My guess is that he wants to work his way up the chain to find his brother, but I don't know. I wonder if he is evil, due to his considering David a pet? Great chapter, Darkshadow!! Link to comment
DarkShadow Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 This story is really developing! Asher is still a mystery. What are his intentions? My guess is that he wants to work his way up the chain to find his brother, but I don't know. I wonder if he is evil, due to his considering David a pet? Great chapter, Darkshadow!! EVIL? He's not evil lol... I hope more along the lines of ruthlessly logical. Maybe... Asher views his pet in a way that if he loses David that the sting won't be as horrible as losing a lover. Which... for any of us that have had a pet, know that is not true. Pets become family over time whether we like it or not. Then again... Asher's never had a pet before. Does Asher really seem evil to you? He's definately not supposed to be a likeable character yet I used this chapter to flesh out the people a bit more. I've been told time and time again that I don't give them enough depth, so I hope you were able to see a bit more into the psychy of Asher. I feared going a bit overboard, but Sharon and Birds don't seem to think I have, or... maybe they were just being kind lol Nahh... Birds is pretty blunt. He'd have told me if I were screwing up. As per Graeme's suggestion I've moved away from the 'biblical' side of things. Didn't want to bruise the bible beaters you know I had three endings for this saga flash through my mind last night, and I'm not sure which I'll pick. Lucif, well... I just don't know yet. I'm torn! Thanks for reading Goat I promise not to put any more vaseline on your hooves while you sleep... (well for the next couple of weeks anyway) Slippery sliding goats... I couldn't resist. I think I have a buyer for the photo's on e-bay! Link to comment
zapthestarz Posted December 4, 2006 Share Posted December 4, 2006 question that's bugging me: How do you pronounce slegna? Sleg-na? Slen-ya? Slej-na? I can hear all 3 in my mind; but not sure which one. Cool story though! Link to comment
captainrick Posted December 4, 2006 Share Posted December 4, 2006 question that's bugging me: How do you pronounce slegna? Sleg-na? Slen-ya? Slej-na? I can hear all 3 in my mind; but not sure which one. Cool story though! Just to show you how twisted the author is, try spelling Angels backward. So, I guess you could go with the phonetic sleg-na or the slej-na as the g in angels is soft. Link to comment
DarkShadow Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 question that's bugging me: How do you pronounce slegna? Sleg-na? Slen-ya? Slej-na? I can hear all 3 in my mind; but not sure which one. Cool story though! Sorry I didn't answer before now, I didn't see the post. It's pronounced just how you might read it. Nothing fancy. Slegna, with a soft G like in gum. So... <Sleg> <Nuh> Glad you're liking it so far! Just to show you how twisted the author is, try spelling Angels backward. LOL you say the nicest things Link to comment
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