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It's possible someone in Trevor and Shane's inner circle is on Bridgettes payroll. This has been a great story and then end is near. Lot's of questions to be answered in three chapters.

A great author can suspend reality and keep us enthralled, even to the point where the reader relates to the story as if it were reality. This is not a story about the technical aspects of the structure and functions of corporations, it's about fathers and sons. The eternal story of how a boy becomes a man is so intriguing. So many questions about what happens next to these great characters keeps me reading every posting. Mark, you are a darn good writer!

Another well written chapter that is laying the foundation for Will to become the next major player in this saga. Stef is grooming his grandson for the fortune he is likely to inherit. While some may think Stef is 'petty', he has become one of the worlds richest men because of his business acumen. Giving Will a share of Anders-Hayes is small change from Stef's personal wealth. Allowing Will to make a decision in the board room is part of Will's education that you can't get from a textbook. The way to get Brad's attention seems to be thru his passion for Anders-Hayes. The rug has not yet been pulled out from under Brad, but Stef has shown him how easily he could be shut out.

Wow, what an exciting dinner party! Happy New Year fireworks from Mark. The first step to resolving the problem with Robbie, is for Robbie to understand that he has a problem. Robbie needs a major wake up call. Brad can use his legal custody of JJ, and Stef and Brad together can cut Robbie out of his job. Counting down to chapter 91. Thank you Mark for your great writing and we all look forward to what you give us in 2013.

What is the meaning of this provocative snippet? "But you guys are in for one hell of a ride. I'm still weepy over chapter 91" Please don't let anything bad happen to our favorite characters.

Another interesting chapter with Will and Brad. Will is maturing and learning the ways of the world. My New Years wish: A few chapters from JJ. It's hard to figure JJ when we haven't really heard his side of the story. Happy New Year to everyone! :Vic2:

It's normal for an adolescent to have mood swings. Will seems to be able to acknowledge when and why he feels depressed. He also knows that he should get up and do something. People like his mother get depressed and keep going deeper into their depression with no way out. Everyone is allowed to have a bad day and Will is upset about his relationship with JJ. Having your feelings hurt is not the same as a bi-polar disorder. Mark, thank you for your writing and posting such a compelling story.

I am liking Will more now that he is independent. His take charge attitude and his assertiveness, coupled with thoughtful reflection, are making him a possible star in the next generations episode of CAP. Can't help thinking a curve ball is coming at Will. Things are going a little too well and we know Mark can shake things up when the story gets predictable.

Will has a strong connection to the very,very wealthy Stef. He lives in the top one percent of rich people. So that puts him in a social station that British royalty would have interest in. Like him or hate him, Will is a person that people notice. Granger could relate to a little rich boy like Will just as he did with Cavendish. A character similar to Will would fit right in to the Bridgemont saga. But we need Will in his own story where he is getting more action than everyone. What is really amazing to me is how Dr. Arbour can write two different story lines so brilliantly. First thing I check for when I go online is a posting by Mark.

Moving up north is working out well, Will is adding Nana and Noah to his circle of friends. Perhaps he is begining to mature. It's good to see he does really care about his mother.

Thanks for another quick chapter. Nana could be an important friend to Will when he gets more involved in his mother's medical treatment because she is an expert on the subject of bad doctors. I like the scene where Will sees Tony and backs away to think rather than to create an embarrassing scene. Will is maturing.

Will living in a hotel? Expect a visit from Ryan soon........ Can't wait till Will meets Nana.

I think if Elizabeth knows what Brad is capable of (murder) she just might not want to push that issue too far. With the loss of funds and the divorce looming Elizabeth should go to rehab and vanish. I for one do not hate Will. Wish there was someone like him around when I was in school.

Finally Elizabeth gets her day in court. Didn't turn out the way she had planned. Wade may have won this skirmish, but this is a war. Can't wait to hear what the Senator has to say. Another great chapter.

So much information I don't know how to review chapters 23 and 24. It's such a complicated tangle for George to solve, I had to read each chapter twice. I still don't know if George's brother is a good guy or a bad guy. Believe me, we are all reading with great interest. It' just sometimes difficult to comment on such skillful writing. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Nana seems like a great character for the story. I bet Wade can "convince" the nurses to go with his change of plans. Elizabeth will find out how strong Wade has become and the powerful connections he has. The best fights are family fights.

A cliff hanger in CAP and Bridgemont. How delightful.

Is Elizabeth Danfield so evil that she would do something to her own mother? “We need to get Mrs. Garrett to her room,” one of her nurses said. “She has to take her medication.”

SOOOOO happy to see this post. We missed you!

Please forgive me for not reviewing your wonderful story more often. We all love this story and truly hope you take us to the end. I have been late to work sometimes because I check every Tuesday morning and try to read the new posting before leaving for work. PLEASE finish this great story.

Okay, this chapter was way too soft and easy. Unicorns and rainbows are just a smokescreen for some real drama to come. Little 14 year old Will thinks he has it under control but he's going to find that playing with the big boys can get rough. Brad is giving him his freedom but we all know it's not that simple. Come on Mark, hit us with the good stuff.

We understand. Always take care of yourself first. We will be here waiting.

Note to Private Tim I just checked this Webster's entry and I'm sure it applies to this story. Mark is not writing a police report, he is telling a story about people he created in his own mind. Obviously you see the world from a different perspective. Maybe you should just post your own stories and we might, or might not, find them just as compelling. Why do wish Mark to change his story line to fit your expectations? Webster's Definition of FICTION 1 a: something invented by the imagination or feigned; specifically: an invented story b: fictitious literature (as novels or short stories) c: a work of fiction; especially: novel 2 a: an assumption of a possibility as a fact irrespective of the question of its truth <a legal fiction> b: a useful illusion or pretense 3 : the action of feigning or of creating with the imagination — fic·tion·al \-shnəl, -shə-nəl\adjective — fic·tion·al·i·ty \ˌfik-shə-ˈna-lə-tē\noun — fic·tion·al·ly \ˈfik-shnə-lē, -shə-nəl-ē\adverb

Great chapter..........but..............still wating for the thermonuclear explosion. Brad is going to explode! Thermonuclear fusion is a way to achieve nuclear fusion by using extremely high temperatures With the whole family on Will's side it should make the next chapter exciting.