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I'm keeping my eyes on that Wolf rascal!
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A deepening connection. Great stuff!
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Very suspenseful chapter with great pacing. Our JJ is as chill under pressure as a penguin's tail feathers.
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A perceptive comment as sad as it is to admit.
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Pitt is a strong and capable officer, able to weather storms both literal and metaphorical, but can he withstand the onslaught of a midshipman awash in hormones?
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This is great! Can't wait for the next installment.
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Really interesting! Gives depth to that relationship.
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This is an exciting start. I'm looking forward to more.
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I agree. Inquiring minds want an explanation, maybe as a Powerpoint presentation?
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Dad seems to have plenty of good advice. I can't wait to see the decision!
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"Imhotep, the architect that designed the ‘Step’ pyramid" Oh, no, step-pyramid, what are you doing? Yes, the interwebs has ruined me. I'll see myself out.
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The Spark and the Storm ### Battle Drill – The Gun Deck — 08:00 The call came without warning. A sharp rattle of drumsticks cracked across the morning air, **beat to quarters**, shrill and commanding. Above decks, shouts rang out like musket fire. Barefooted sailors sprang from their tasks, their conversations, even their hammocks, scrambling to their stations like blood to a wound. It was only a drill, yes, but the Navy trained for war by conjuring it whole cloth, and every
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Amy Moves In and Marie's New Home
andy cannon commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Amy Moves In and Marie's New Home
Welp! That took a turn. Billy's a cunning troublemaker, but I'm SURE nothing bad will come of this. SMH -
Justus is so chill, but Marcus is wound a little tight. I worry that without yoga or bong rips or a wank or something, he'll have a heart attack by Chapter Five.
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Two very different evenings. What's a boy to do?
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Great story about the passage of time and how memory and perception diverge.
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S2 E9: Lunch With Frenchman
andy cannon commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E9: Lunch With Frenchman
I dig Elliot! What an interesting, complex character, confident, perceptive, direct yet subtle and nuanced, More! -
[Memory, Freshman Year, February] – Sharp, Bitter, Sour
andy cannon commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, February] – Sharp, Bitter, Sour
Wow! Those were very intense conversations. A lot of subtext that I am looking forward to watching develop. -
Interesting story with effective world building.
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Part 2: Sitting on Jace's Lap
andy cannon commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 2: Sitting on Jace's Lap
Well, way to leave us hanging here! That is a very exciting installment, -
This great fun! Very well done.
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Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
andy cannon commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: Noah makes a choice. Will everything be okay now?
More twists and turns than a mountain road! My heart hurts for Noah, but this is a great chapter. -
Uhhh... is it just me or does anyone else want to scream, "Don't open that door!" This is a great story.
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The pain in this chapter is almost overwhelming, but Jonah continues to be a chaotic gremlin star. He deserves an entire novel about himself.
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The Bridges of Parke County
andy cannon commented on Altimexis's story chapter in The Bridges of Parke County
This is unfolding at a very deliberate pace that is well suited to the nostalgic tone. I look forward to more!
