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Very promising!
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Bo and Dolly are great supporting characters, but I worry about what horrors lurk in the future for them.
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... the echo of love that now spanned three hearts. And alone in his quiet living room, Eddie let himself believe that tomorrow would bring the words—and the courage—they all needed. Much promise for the future contained in these lines.
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This is fascinating, and I look forward to more. I have a question about your map. It looks like you have the area around Dubrovnik as under Venetian control, but I would have thought that was the Republic of Ragusa for a century by then. Am I misremembering the facts or is Dubrovnik to the left of the map?
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Characters annoyingly often have a mind of their own. A bunch of unruly toddlers.
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The alarm clock scene is great! All that insistent demand juuust out of reach.
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Great writing! I really enjoyed this. Beautiful Firenze AND a dog? I am beyond happy!
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Chapter 14: Noah is losing his mind. Will he forgive Jace?
andy cannon commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 14: Noah is losing his mind. Will he forgive Jace?
Whatever. I have two words for that-- Yorktown, bitches. 😁 -
Levior penna letum, officium gravius monte Orlop Deck -- Emergence Jamie Blake had scarcely left the dank, grim confines of the orlop deck, the bowels of Absolute, where the air was thick with mildew and salt, and the low beams seemed to press the weight of the sea upon his shoulders. He’d been kept mostly to the midshipmen’s berth, emerging only to shuffle to the surgeon to tend the neat, angry wound at his neck. The foul scent of bilge, the ever-present creak of timbers, and the mur
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Chapter 14: Noah is losing his mind. Will he forgive Jace?
andy cannon commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 14: Noah is losing his mind. Will he forgive Jace?
Just in from the "Exception that Proves the Rule Department", the current Queen of the United Kingdom has given hope to mistresses all over the world who hope one day to emerge from the secret shadows with guns blazing. -
I knew what I wanted to do. I broke away and looked deep into his eyes. "Can I stay tonight?" One has to admire a lad who knows what he wants and doesn't falter in the pursuit.
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Very well expressed. I agree 100%
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The mysteries deepen around the night, and our curiosity is stretched to the breaking point!
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Very witty and enjoyable story!
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The Pinnacle of Avarice
andy cannon commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in The Pinnacle of Avarice
Shapes appeared in the portal — Xin-Shalast at its height, filled with tens of thousands of giants, dragons, lamias. Sounds and smells wafted through the image, drawing on Arlo’s fears that this wasn’t just a spacial portal — it was a temporal portal. Pay no attention to that clacking sound. It's either my teeth chattering together or my knees knocking from anxiety, Carry on! -
Great chapter. You have a distinctive writing style that is fun to read.
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"Dildestiny" --- heh heh.😄
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Very tense and dramatic!
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Beautifully written chapter, but wow! some of that was painful if the reader has any empathy at all for the characters. As JJ says, ‘He’ll get over it.’ LOL.
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Very true. This exchange shows how much trouble Pitt is in; “William,” he croaked. “We did it. We really did it. We beat them and came through it breathing.” “Under the circumstances, Midshipman,” he said, with what dignity he could muster, “I will overlook the impertinent use of my Christian name. But aye, we are victorious.” Somehow, impossibly, Jamie’s grin grew even wider. “Tell me, Lieutenant,” he said, cheekily stressing the rank, “how far up your arse does that ramrod go?”
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That was very hot! Excellent chapter!
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Great start! Matt's claim of his prize was very hot, gave me a case of the vapours! I'll be on the fainting couch.
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"That sounded like a solid plan. " Ah, yes. The International Secret Code for "it's all about to go pear-shaped"! Great chapter.
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A really fun start to this series of short vignettes.
