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VIII. You can’t run from your problems
andy cannon commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in VIII. You can’t run from your problems
The banter among the crew is wonderful! -
The journey to 31st December 1973
andy cannon commented on Gary L's story chapter in The journey to 31st December 1973
A great start to another story set in a troubled time in Spain's history. Gerardo has his hands full with Ximo, I suspect. -
V. You look different
andy cannon commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in V. You look different
Nico is the poster child for "obtuse". -
Tough chapter to read.
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Wonderful! I am looking forward to the next few weeks’ reading .
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The tension is mounting!!!
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Great story, Thank you for sharing it.
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IV. Unpacking emotional baggage
andy cannon commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in IV. Unpacking emotional baggage
Another great chapter. I love the interplay between Nico and Logan. . -
Very hot shower scene! Loving this!
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Another great chapter! This cat and mouse game between Brett and Colt is intriguing.
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A clever, witty tale told by a master story-teller. Bravo!
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III. Crossing swords
andy cannon commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in III. Crossing swords
[I'll try not to kiss you] Logan added. Nico read that again. Then again. Uhhh… [kill you] quickly came in after. Oh. [fucking autocorrect]. HATE it when that happens!!! -
I pondered a bit when Marc referred to the 'running group'... could two runners constitute a group? Then I factored in the pacing horse, "Unresolved Sexual Tension" and concluded that three's a group.
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Simmering along nicely. Very slow burn, and those often lead to the more spectacular eruptions.
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Great start! Brings back memories of my time in Munich, but I sincerely hope that this "running as foreplay" doesn't catch on. My knees couldn't keep up with my libido.
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Wonderful world building.
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Really exciting stuff!
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Aha! The list of suspects is growing!
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Parted at the start of a terribly brutal war. What's to come for Cecil and Hudson?
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Another great chapter. Drama and tension a-plenty!
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Great opening chapter! Fast pace and snappy dialog. I look forward to the next chapter.
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The plan to take George down is alarming! So much can go wrong.
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That last line sounds ominous, even coming from a narrator sitting in an abattoir!
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What a great story! I read an article several years ago about the disparity in pay in adult films. Women are paid the most, then at a considerably lower rate are men in gay films. Men in straight films are way behind at the bottom of the scale, practically paid in coupons for studio merch. Mark seems to have hit on the secret to maxxing out the pay packet.
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I worry that the ill-advised tampering with Brett's truck will come back to hurt Noah and Colt.
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