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Great chapter. I can see why Alex can tell the helicopter doesn't have lights on, but how can he tell the transponder is turned off?
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A terse and ominous opening to this story. Well done!
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A modern hymn to doomed love, spiritual, defiant, and beautifully human.
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Jason... Jason... Jason... have we learned nothing?
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I think you are onto something there.
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Chapter 1: When darkness whispers!
andy cannon commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: When darkness whispers!
The pacing, atmosphere, and dialogue are deftly handled. It balances action, horror, and intimacy with precision. Great chapter. -
Prologue: Where it all begun!
andy cannon commented on vanalas's story chapter in Prologue: Where it all begun!
Very promising! The story reads like a legend retold, part myth, part prophecy, anchored by themes of power, sacrifice, and cyclical corruption. It blends epic fantasy with intimate emotional moments, managing to feel both sweeping and personal. Its tone is reminiscent George R.R. Martin’s moral grayness, with a touch of dark Gothic romanticism. -
A gorgeous tale about a love letter made of shared music. Well written and wonderfully nostalgic.
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An achingly beautiful story of finding the love that has been within reach all along revealed through carefully curated playlists. I want to to go back and listen to all these tracks again now! But who recorded the pivotal acoustic cover of "MMMBop"? Or is that just poetic license?
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A thought-provoking verse about love cycling through ruin and redemption.
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On my way. What's on the menu?
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A beautiful summation of the pain of loss? Unrequited love?
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Great chapter, absolutely heartbreaking.
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A very moving story about extremely focused faith and how an abused son found relief through the compassion of neighbors and an unlikely canine rescuer. Well written.
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This chapter went from one weird but effective scene to another. Very compelling. I'll miss these guys when the story is completed.
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Another powerful chapter, but isn't there an emergency vet in this town? Poor doggo suffering with untreated broken ribs!
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Stupid Jason Doing Stupid Things
andy cannon commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Stupid Jason Doing Stupid Things
Wow! That was an intense chapter. It was a nice surprise to see the "stupid things" was showing a little backbone. -
Powerful chapter.
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My dog is very unhappy with this chapter because I keep grabbing her and sniveling in her fur while she is trying to get her nap on. Her message to the author: Get the mutt healthy ASAP so she can get her beauty sleep. Thank you.
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I am enjoying this story so much, but Åke and Matthijs are such frustrating characters. And Kevin is not much better! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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A funny and charming story about two men finding unlikely comfort in their differences. Well worth the time it takes to read it!
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A delightful and witty story. The business of talking to a judgmental spider is a hoot! This is a standout exchange: “Okay. This slaps.” “It what now?” “It means it’s good.” “Why didn’t you just say that?” “Because I’m under 40 and have internet access.”
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Great chapter! If they ever have a Complicated Relationships Contest, Jason and Konstantine are in the running for "Best in Show".
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Prologue: Stolen I-Pods
andy cannon commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Prologue: Stolen I-Pods
I was sure the bad night at the restaurant would be the party of six doing a dine-n-dash, leaving the narrator with the $800 tab. Still a pretty dark look inside the mind of the narrator at a dark time. Dr. Susan will earn her fee with this one!
