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Toast

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  1. I don't have a tumblr account but I know what it is and I have visited a few sites. Usually, I visit because the person who has one is interesting or it is linked by someone I like.
  2. Happy Birthday, Sweet Matt !
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    Eldaran

    Enjoyed your story.
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    Chapter 6

    Still reading, still enjoying. Everything just got turned upside down completely.
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    Chapter 3

    Double Dang!
  6. K is for Kmart R is for Ross I is for Ingles S it for Sam's Club T is for Target A is for Army/Navy Surplus You gorgeous strip mall of a girl Happy Birthday !
  7. Usually it's me reaching for something to eat.
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    Chapter 2

    Dang!
  9. Whatever your age, like yourself and others.
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    The Return

    Caught up again with the story, still a favorite.
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    What It's Like

    I thought you did this one well.
  12. I like the underlying humor. It's like my life is crap and as hard as I try to complain about it, I can hear laughter.
  13. Why do guys think they and their lives aren't interesting ? Toby seems very interesting.
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    Giving Back

    I enjoyed the story.
  15. Merry Christmas Mark.
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    Chapter 1

    Yep, I'll read your story.
  17. by Foster/bugeye What isn’t said What isn’t felt What isn’t seen What isn’t dead The here and now The day behind The day ahead Moments in between Never shared Just you and me Parted instead and Ever bared 12.24.13
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    New Boy (Part II)

    Had no trouble getting back into the story. The new chapter flows with the same ease as the others and 9000 words just flew by. I got to start asking for chapter 12.
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    Preparations

    I like Prince and the Pauper.
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    The Public Pool

    Well Joshua is hard on himself in some ways. Here he is stepping out of his comfort zone going to the public pool. He is thinking about the other kids. He likes this. He sees his parents clearly. He understands the consequences. And I believe he is learning to deal even with Parker slowly on his terms... he hasn't given him any money. Someone needs to say. You are becoming a man. Because it seems that way to me.
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    Josh

    Parker... Philip.... will there be a third villain named Peter? Lol like maybe his father. Anyway, enjoyed the prologue and chapter one. You write really well, your English is better than most.
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    Seeking Clarity

    Continue soon.
  23. Happy Birthday, John ! ♥
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    Open Your Eyes

    I like this story so much.
  25. Let's not forget... What's New Pussycat.
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