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    Chapter 33

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 33

    Life is handing JP a beating, which way will this drive him?
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    You know how to keep things tense. Enjoying the story.
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    Prologue

    Toast commented on Docile's story chapter in Prologue

    Allegorical. Of the story ahead?
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    Chapter 32

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 32

    I like JP, but I wonder where this more explosive? side of him comes from. Is it from maintaining his calm persona most of the time. Is it his suppression of daily emotion that leads him to outbursts when he is irritated or angry or pressured. It is his weak stop I think. ? Does it make him more human, cause otherwise he is amazing. It kind of reminds me of the fatal flaw of the greek hero.
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    Chapter 28

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 28

    I was crazy about the corvette stingray when it came out. We had an aluminum tree too. The first color tv's had a round picture tube and the only show at first in color was Walt Disney's Wonderful World of Color. These last chapters have been wonderful to read.
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    Chapter 27

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 27

    I wasn't expecting that. Great chapter.
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    Chapter 26

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 26

    I don't know if this was the best chapter so far, but it felt that way.
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    Chapter 25

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 25

    A very good chapter, but truly sad.
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    Chapter 24

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 24

    Life has a way of catching up with all of us.
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    Happy Birthday!
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    Chapter 20

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 20

    The last three chapters were really good but they threw me and maybe shocked me a little. Action and consequence. Maybe this is another theme here. But I couldn't stop reading. I gave reps
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    Chapter 17

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 17

    Andre is back, yay!
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    Chapter 16

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Poor grumpy Prof. Jensen. I really hope JP charms the guy. But I guess that's not going to happen. Hope we see more of Jeff.
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    Chapter 15

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 15

    LOL, try to be extra noisy.
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    Chapter 14

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 14

    JP certainly lives in interesting times. And knows the most interesting people.
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    Chapter 13

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 13

    Dang, just when I thought one thing, it turns into another. Good.
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    Chapter 12

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 12

    I cried over the father part in the hospital. Another good chapter.
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    Chapter 11

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Man, what a great chapter.
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    Chapter 10

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 10

    I'm glad Stefan is turning out to be good guy. And I like that JP struggles and has his own moments of doubt.
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    The Outside

    Toast commented on Mark92's story chapter in The Outside

    Very nice, I enjoyed reading this.
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    Chapter 9

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 9

    What a damn good chapter.
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    Thank you, I don't know how you found this. I thought it was hidden well. Thanks.
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    Poem, 3.7.11

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem, 3.7.11

    Thanks Mark for taking time to read and review. It means a lot to me that you did.
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    Chapter 8

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Yes, I am of course still reading. If I don't review every chapter, know I will be giving out lots of reps because it is so good and I am enjoying it very much.
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    __________4.7.11 and 5.8.11 __________bye bugeye __________Thoughts about a conversation __________Lost somewhere __________Along the time of a regret __________Left alone __________In plain sight __________Easy to ignore __________And never to be revisited __________All my favorite words __________Were used __________Like an old player piano __________That pla
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