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    Chapter 9

    Toast commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Wonder how Michael is going to explain this to Nate?
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    Chapter 8

    Toast commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 8

    I liked this chapter, it gave me a chance to think of Michael's start at a new life. It made the story more solid.
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    Beauty and the Beast

    Toast commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Beauty and the Beast

    Diabolical. I think Tori is the virgin queen of this story, cause she has no boyfriend.
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    I like your writing and strangely, I like your life.
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    Fight Club

    Toast commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Fight Club

    Funny and Painful. Thanks for a good chapter.
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    Thank you Kevin.
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    Poem, One

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem, One

    Thank you, I appreciate it.
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    Revelations

    Toast commented on Mark92's story chapter in Revelations

    All I can think about is the cliffhanger at the end, you beast, you and James are so bad.
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    Some positive things for Bran in this chapter.
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    Poem, One

    Toast posted new chapter in 7.18.11

    __________7.18.11 __________bye bugeye Domination sunrise___________ Obsessive heat___________ Beating meat___________ Living still___________ Once I was___________ It pulled thru me___________ It emptied out___________ From this space___________ Left void___________ That echoes about___________
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    7.18.11

    Toast posted a story in Poetry

    Poem, 7.18.11
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    The deal with Keith is strange, there must be more to it than that. But I am glad he is gone, if he is. I wonder what direction you are going to take this now.
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    Chapter Eight: Leia

    Toast commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter Eight: Leia

    Another good chapter, the story always getting better with new clues to the mystery.
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    H.R.S.A.

    Toast commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in H.R.S.A.

    What's to say but excellent. I really like this one. Because of the way it reads. So powerful.
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    Spiritual Crisis

    Toast commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Spiritual Crisis

    A poem of conflict, of conscious, maybe of a time before perception, acceptance. It reads very well. I liked it.
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    Very good chapter. Well written. And painful.
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    Hugs, if they help.
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    Happy Birthday Sara!
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    I'm glad Bran told Jordan. Maybe this means Bran is starting to think.
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    I don't like Keith. It's like Brandon is being controlled. You have me speculating all kinds of things.
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    The Devil Wears Prada

    Toast commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Devil Wears Prada

    It's that Logan is choosing to make an ass of himself that is so frustrating. He and Tori are almost sociopathic in their behavior. But fun to read about . I hope no one ends up sliced and diced.
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    This is a happy poem.
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    Oh What A Pickle!

    Toast commented on Mark92's story chapter in Oh What A Pickle!

    Was there ever any doubt, you like pickles.
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    Mandartania

    Toast commented on Mark92's story chapter in Mandartania

    Wait? Is this the same Maria I know?
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    Congratulations Sara!
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