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    The Legacy

    Toast commented on Mark92's story in Fiction

    A nice opening and spooky.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 1

    I know these feelings well.
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    Thank you Mark.
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    It's hard to know with these two, if this will bond them or destroy them. But I think I will enjoy reading the answer.
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    Chapter 48

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 48

    A good ending.
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    Chapter 12: Lunch Box

    Toast commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 12: Lunch Box

    Wow, extreme. Extremely well done.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 1

    So, you did what was best and what you thought was right and walked back home?
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    Thanks so much for the "little hi". Now I want a full body contact hug. That should be about a thousand words, more or less.
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    Chapter 47

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 47

    You big soft-hearted guy, I loved that chapter. But to be honest, I am worried, what are you planning for the last chapter?
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    Chapter 46

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 46

    I couldn't help but worry for Jason.
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    Chapter 44

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 44

    Nice of Tonto to buy the old condo for Stefan. Isidore is either very smart or just very much a woman, . I like that family plays such a big role in this story. Poor Jason. And poor JP, he has made another declaration.
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    The Senses

    Toast commented on Mark92's story chapter in The Senses

    A lot of tension in this poem of control over mind and body and soul.
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    Poem, 3.7.11

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem, 3.7.11

    Thank you.
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    All alone

    Toast commented on Douw's blog entry in Douw's Blog

    Never alone Douw. And you are strong and can be as strong as it takes to get thru this. Love Sam
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    Chapter 43

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 43

    This chapter had real charm and I liked it a lot.
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    These guys are spooky but they make a good story.
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    Chapter 42

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 42

    I like this chapter because it was homey. The new home/palace, the baby, Isidore being petite noblige. And I loved the Riviera.
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    Chapter 41

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 41

    I have always been interested in architecture, so designing a whole floor for a condo is my idea of wonderful. I hope it becomes a home for them all.
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    Birthday

    Toast replied to Mark92's topic in The Lounge

    Happy Birthday Alex! ♥
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Bumblebee's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Powerful and honest and innately strong. Original because the voice rings so independent, true.
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    Chapter 40

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 40

    Well, just dang, that sucks.
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    Chapter 39

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 39

    This is a very interesting twist the FBI and I guess Hoover.
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    Chapter 38

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 38

    Every chapter delivers. And this one delivered!
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    Chapter 37

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 37

    JP seems to be finding forgiveness and healing here.
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    Chapter 35

    Toast commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 35

    Another heartbreaker, but a great chapter.
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