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  1. Toast
    This is a disturbing thriller, complicated with plot twists and emotions and the unexpected and the spooky.
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    Oh, gosh! That ending was frightening.
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    I really liked this one. It's intimacy and it's cruelty.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Tenebrae's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Oh, for me the poem caught my fancy, I was back in childhood, seeing SnowWhite and Sleeping Beauty. It was all mystical.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Tenebrae's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I like the intensity of your words. The critical moment of emotion.
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    That was creepy, but well written creepy.
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    Chapter One: Brandon

    Toast commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter One: Brandon

    Well, you certainly created another dimension for me. I enjoyed reading.
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    Picture Perfect

    Toast commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Picture Perfect

    Oh, gosh, Logan is a bitch too, just like Victoria. My only hope is Eric. Don't shatter it please. Good writing and eeeeeeek! it was fun to read.
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    Can you see me now?

    Toast commented on Bumblebee's story chapter in Can you see me now?

    This is one of the hardest things to deal with in life.
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    Where are you?

    Toast commented on Bumblebee's story chapter in Where are you?

    Nice and straight to the heart of the matter.
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    Iron Man

    Toast commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Iron Man

    This was a great romp, with great humor. So the extent of the damage and vandalism at the end was unexpected. Was that dark humor or something to take seriously? So, there is going to be a really dark side to this story? It will be interesting to see you juggle these two tones in your story. BTW, is juged a slang term I am unaware of? Like your characters and your first chapter. Looks to be another wonderful and different story.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thanks for noticing one of my stories.
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    Chapter 3

    Toast commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 3

    I loved the last line. So the court is evil or corrupted. Or is this just normal vampire etiquette. A kind of king of the mountain game were the strongest vamp rules? Has Shade picked a side then? I am enjoying. Well written chapter.
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    Chapter 2

    Toast commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 2

    I liked the Kieper guy. And your writing carried the along nicely.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thought like enjoying vamps tonight. This one was tasty.
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    I like the playlist.
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    Chapter 10

    Toast commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Oh, I like this. Please continue soon.
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    Poem, 5.19.11

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem, 5.19.11

    Thanks Maria, I have a bad habit of not saying thanks. I think it is because I am too close to what I write at first to assimilate.
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    5.19.11

    Toast commented on Toast's story in Poetry

    A lot of me is the past, so I am nostalgic. I look back to see where I am going. Thanks for reading and letting me know with a review.
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    Chapter 9

    Toast commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 9

    This story is still maneuvering around, we are still figuring out who is who and what they want and who they are. I like that.
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    Chapter 8

    Toast commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Nice twist in the story, I did not expect. But it fits so well.
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    Chapter 7

    Toast commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 7

    These two guys have had quite the day, makes me wonder about perfect days. Sometimes they happen and change peoples lives forever.
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    Chapter 6

    Toast commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Everyone wants something for Corey. What does Corey want? Is he about to find out?
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    Chapter 5

    Toast commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Gosh, that was a fun chapter. Dance lessons and a tick attack.
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    Thank you Kevin, you have the soul of a great man, kind and generous and loyal.
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