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    Stetson Boy

    Toast commented on Johnathan Colourfield's story chapter in Stetson Boy

    A metaphor for being drawn to the darker side of our desires, maybe. I enjoyed your story.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This was a nice surprise to see Jerry/Chris again. You write humor well.
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    The cubby hole

    Toast commented on Mark92's story chapter in The cubby hole

    That breaks my heart.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I have always enjoyed fantasy and had a good time reading this one.
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    Dare

    Toast commented on Sara Alva's story chapter in Dare

    This was just a wonderful story, written very well. And I loved the ending! You are really really good at this.
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    Nice James.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A very nice love story.
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    You handle your words well, I was as interested in them as much as your characters written monologue.
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    Hold 32

    Toast commented on CarlHoliday's story chapter in Hold 32

    I liked your two plumbers and their "all in a day's work" attitude. Seems they share that with the occupants of Hold 32.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I really liked the idea of the catwalk as a walk on the wild side. And you always create the wildest of men.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Bucky and Elmo are bad news! For everyone but your readers. Enjoyed. Lots of fun.
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    Needle in a Hay Stack

    Toast commented on Lugh's story chapter in Needle in a Hay Stack

    Now, that I am all into it again and enjoying it.... I have to wait for the next anthology! Thanks for your story.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you for reviewing>
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you for your review.
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    Why?

    Toast commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Why?

    I do love a mysterious story. But who/what is the mystery? The girl. Alex and Patrick. The road. The kiss. Nicely written as always.
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    The Midnight Hour

    Toast commented on Mark92's story chapter in The Midnight Hour

    Your own wonderful world, reflected in word. Enjoyed.
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    Memories

    Toast commented on NightOwl88's story chapter in Memories

    Very glad to find this updated today. I hope there is much more to come. Good solid writing.
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    Happy Birthday Bob!
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    I like Adam. But James is hiding some very bad things? This seems destined to end bad too. Or are there other things going on that have not been revealed? Is this a house of evil built by men of evil? Good writing.
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    This story well deserves the praise it is receiving. I am just as hooked as everyone else. Blake's internal world is so frustrating and annoying and heartbreaking. A good bit of the story is the unfolding of this self-abuse he struggles to control. This is contrasted with a real world that is not within his control either but seems to be offering him a better life, Haze. I think we get Blake as readers at this point in the story, but Haze is still a mystery. Excellent. Superior.
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