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  1. Toast

    Change

    Good chapter, thanks.
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    4.5.15 Picture Poem

    A ballet Is spring A conspiracy of rejoicing Be happy Be young Dance and sing And love Let go Let go And fall into the embrace It's all wildly hypnotic Dangerously symbiotic The spiral of life
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    Chapter 1

    Great start. I was really glad that Colleen brought him a straw with the second cup of water.
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    4.3.15 Picture and Poem

    I'm not afraid of the night. I walk the shadows and watch the moon blink in blink out from a lace of seduction... sky fields sail in waves. Under this cherry tree I cast my prayers and wish it was this simple. Knowing sorrow comes with each new day has no surprise.
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    Chapter 14

    Wonderful chapter, Mparntwe is as good as Attunga.
  6. Thanks AJ, I will miss you. Find your guy and have those kids and live well.
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    Chapter 2

    I didn’t believe my eyes. It was one of those moments. One of those overwhelming, dangerous moments when you realize how completely… lost you are. How did I get to this point. … On my way home for the day's excursion, I turned my truck into my new driveway that led across the old, terraced and walled fields to my new home. Each terrace was marked with stone walls carefully built by great uncle Arthur. I passed the original farmhouse where I had lived occasionally over the last twenty somet
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    Chapter 18

    Great fun to read, thanks.
  9. Makes me want to read more.
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    The Way Out

    Ah, so this is his home he is returning to. Next chapter should be good.
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    Chapter 13

    Great holiday, even if I only got to read about it.
  12. Congratulations, Aditus !
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    Nods

    Good chapter.
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    Road's End

    It will be a different story from now on I suppose.
  15. Keep going and I will keep reading.
  16. It's always a good day to read when you post, thanks.
  17. I enjoyed the beginning and will watch for more. You might wish to change the story's status to in progress instead of complete until the whole story is posted ?
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    Chapter 12

    I'm so into this story.
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    On Being Old

    I had an acquaintance/friend who walked for exercise, a lot. Ten miles a day in all kinds of weather. I thought he was in his early sixties and very well preserved. But as I got to know him I found out he was in his middle nineties. He was one of the most charismatic and attractive men I have ever encountered.
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    Tulips in my windows

    Last one, I have too many flowers.
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    Tulips in my windows

    Thanks for the comments and likes. These are in my windows too.
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    Tulips in my windows

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    Arrival

    I liked the start, especially the first line.
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    Chapter 11

    Love reading this.
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