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Did you catch Monday's post with Comicality's favorite reviews from Light Reaches Earth? Didn't get the graphic for your signature? You can still check it out here. Now we're going to feature Comsie's chosen excerpt. Comicality says... "This story was written for one of the GayAuthor Anthologies, and I really wanted to tell a story with a science fiction edge to it, but mostly existed as an emotionally involving tale of true connection and self discovery. No sexual content needed. Just a narrative on who we are and what we're searching for in this life. Happiness. I hope this story did the trick. I chose this section as an introduction to the meeting between both boys, and the intrigue and fascination that comes with them preparing to match wits on the idea of intelligent life itself in the universe. I hope it will get you all to read more." Want to read more? Check out the rest of the story here!

“I’m not a glutton for punishment, so I’ll call Uncle Radford this weekend. I don’t want to talk to him after he’s had to teach a freshman class.” “Trust me, I get it. You wouldn’t believe the lectures he gave me about proper behavior and appreciating that this streak allowed human werekin to pursue higher education.” Kraig covered the bandage around the bad wound on his wrist. “Not that I ever got to attend a class.” “You don’t have to talk about that right now. Do you feel up to going for a

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LOL! I'm glad you did. I loved the irony of the contrast of Elian's choice and his boon along with the name meanings (did you look up Elian and Cresil? I also wanted to play with the double-edged nature of the US-style lottery by making the lottery Elian faced have a negative death tie but then also do a nebulous positive tone too. Plus I don't mention where he Ascends or how, so it's only really "death" if you think of this life as the only physical existence possible.

Well a lottery can be so many things, as seen from The Island, Hunger Games, and the US $$ version, but I wanted to go a little different. Teasing hints of what the lottery entails, but I didn't really explain it all, so it could be expanded later. LOL, a lot of my prompts could, actually. Thanks for reviewing, Lux!

Thanks, Gary! I was using a few different underlying themes with this short like the names and that whole poetic justice you mentioned.

Interesting, except streak dynamics don't work that way. No one picked up on the fact that Uncle Radford has a job outside the streak, so that means... well, I guess readers will learn next week. LOL Thanks for reading, Gary!

“Marked for Ascension, I see.” Felix tapped a few buttons on his computer and robotic arms picked up my car and began working underneath. “That makes sense then.” “What makes sense?” Elian asked. He fingered the sunburst on his forehead. “Why someone would cut your brake lines. They failed because you lost all the fluid. You designate your successor?” Elian gaped at him. “I-I did. Every lottery winner has to before Rising.” The mechanic shook his head. “I’m real sorry to hear that.” It was

LOL! That is so funny! Sometimes when I'm reading I end up wanting whatever the characters are eating, especially creamy, soft scrambled eggs. Thanks for reading, Gary, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

The strands of the story are starting to come together, but more and more questions are coming out than being answered. More will come soon then!

Far, far reaching borders, and Park has/had issues after the loss of his brother. He was absent more than not, doing his duty to help protect the streak by patrolling, but he avoided a lot of people.

Thanks, Lux! It's a challenge to stay in the word count and not have 'filler' chapters where things lag. Glad I'm achieving success so far!

Hopefully he'll stay under control, and the stray won't bring trouble.

Genetics... it's a lot of genetics on both questions you have. It'll definitely be interesting when we see Park's human werekin finally.

I can't say anything about dissent in the ranks, but I did want to keep this believable. When the characters automatically "know" enough to figure out all the plot elements, it drives me crazy. They need the help, so they're going to have to reach out, even if it is dangerous. Thanks for your thoughts, Lux, I love hearing such in-depth thoughts!

Mebbe. Can't say more without spoiling.

“Let me find out what he knows,” Park said. “He’ll talk to me.” “Is he a danger?” That was the biggest worry I had. I didn’t like this stranger showing up right after I found Kraig again. “I won’t tolerate any risk to the streak.” “I don’t think so, but I’ll watch him closely.” “Come over when you know more. I’m sure Kraig would like to spend more time with you. Tomorrow, though.” I was reining in my instincts as much as possible, but I chafed at the responsibilities taking me away from Kraig

“Come on, Kraig. It’s me, Deke. You know me. You blooded me just a few hours ago, remember? Listen to my voice. Feel me. All you have to do is take my hand. That’s it. I’ll help you with the rest.” I stuck my arm under the bed and then pulled back hastily when Kraig hissed. My mistake. He wasn’t ready yet. “Do you remember that time when we were about ten? Well, Park and I were ten. You were still single digits and tiny as can be. Park and I were playing keep away, and you got so mad. That thro

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I cut off soda about 3 months ago, though I've had a few (usually root beer) since then. I'm okay with cold "coffee drinks", though I cut them with a lot of milk because they're so sweet. If I really want caffeine I usually go for tea. I brew my own loose leaf tea, though, so it's generally a lot healthier than any other caffeine drink.

I think Deke's attempt at levity was almost a 'laugh or cry' response. There are definitely a lot of challenges to come!

Highs and lows definitely come with the territory, but Deke and Kraig have to just keep talking.

Trauma can't be magicked away with love, but I'm sure Deke wishes it could be!