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I think you got that wrong, there is no way Em and Elio could have gotten to Vegas in that short time frame from when they were in the school, I think Roland and Miles were dropped off with instructions on who to ask for and what not to tell anyone. @empath another great chapter keep up the good work cant wait for the next installment.

I think you got that wrong I think its "The Happy End!!!" not ?

@CincyKris What took you 47 minutes is what we want to know ....

Its a whole two hours since this chapter was posted, I think we have been abandoned (again) guess we have to fend for ourselves.

I am sad to see the end of this story but am hopeful for another story in the series because I feel the world that has been created here has a lot of potential for many future adventures. Thanks again @Libby Drew for another great story to entertain us and I cant wait to see what you come up next

I love the story so far. There is just one big problem. The chapters finish too quickly and I have to wait for the next chapter 😭

A great ending to a great story! would love to revisit the 3 in the future to see how they are fairing. and how many kids they have collected along the way. Thanks @Libby Drew

Now I feel bad for sharing my theory and possibly spoiling the surprise. Still hoping for that happy ending.

Its 10 past 6 here where is this next chapter I have to know what happens to Lucas!!!!!

OK time for my Theory It was never Macy he was to save. He was meant to save Lucas. as far as I can remember Jase said his vision showed Macy and a lot of blood it never said she was hurt I think he just presumed it. It would also explain why he would not be able to feel Macy because it wasn't Macy he was tracking he was tracking Lucas and as he was beside him.... I will await the next chapter with baited breath.

I was going to say this the last chapter but held my tongue but cant anymore. For such a smart guy's they can be such dumb asses. If I was a billionaire boy genius trying to revolutionize the world I would be wearing a bulletproof vest anytime I would step outside. There would be hundreds if not thousands of people willing to take me out to stop me from destroying their lucrative businesses. Not to mention all the crazies in the world that believe they deserver my money. I would have thought J.J would be more more intelligent especially after getting kidnaped twice! Anyway now that rant is out of the way I am happy that Henry is alive and was at least a little smarter and I am saying a little smarter because he used the wrong reason to wear the vest. Can't wait what the next chapter has in store hopefully less bullets Regards T

You just had to say it now didn't you and I bet you didn't knock on wood while you said it. Guess we are all screwed and not in a good way

Great way to start the new year with another great chapter. Have a Happy and Health 2022 @Altimexis

I had thought the Applazon torch angle and also briefly considered Shawn but think bad wiring or lightning strike might be more plausible. Off to New York we go

I wish I could be JJ's friend the projects he's working on and thoughts are amazing and I can understand at least 2/3 of what is being talked about. But not only that I wish I could be there for him as a friend to talk to and confide in I think he could do with some friends to ground him like he suggested to Henry. Over the last 10 years I learned that working all the time is no way to live and a great way to loose friends. It took a near burnout for me to realize I had a problem am now trying to create a healthy work life balance and find new freinds and hopefully love. It looks like JJ is smarter than me and was able to figure it out much quicker that happiness trumps work and if work wont play ball then its time to find new work. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Thanks @Mawgrim for another great story. I would not mind revisiting these two in the future and can't wait to see what you think of next.

Sad to see the story coming to an end as it has given me hope that I might some day still find love.

The best thing Jenson can do now in my opinion is tell his parents everything Hunter has told him and maybe they can help and maybe take him in like @weinerdog suggested. This was a heavy chapter I'm so far on the edge of my seat I might as well be sitting on the floor and I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to sleep not knowing how Hunter is and what is going to happen. Please don't keep me us waiting on answers !!!!!

I'm ether having Déjà vu or I have read this story before somewhere. Still if I remember correctly it was a good story definitely deserving a re read.

Hi had so hoped that Hunter and Jenson would work out and that they would be good for each other as they both deserve so much happiness. I also worry Jenson might go back to Dave which is a really bad Idea. @James Matthews please don't keep us hanging too long.

I really like this story. I especially like the trip down memory lane it started when it mentioned Adobe Dreamweaver which is the program I started developing websites with back in 2000 before moving on to other programing languages. It even nearly got me a job with AWS a couple of years ago. I can't wait to hear what's next in store for J.J and what kind of trouble he is going to cause.

I don't condone Dave's actions but I do hope he gets better and finds love himself

I was ready to start crying when I saw The End but then dried my eyes when I saw you mention we were getting a Puppy 2 I can't wait I hope in Puppy 2 we see Dave get the help he needs and find a boyfriend he also deserves some happiness. And I cant wait for Cindy to meet Stephen I think they could end up being an explosive couple with Cindy wearing the pants in the relationship. Don't keep us waiting too long pleas I need my Puppy fix

Hmm wondering if the girl Steven met at lunch time happens to be new and if her name happens to be Cindy. Don't keep us in suspense too long @James Matthews!!!!

I have to say I don't trust Greenstone especially after I heard that Puppy had a trust fund and from the sounds of it they were medicating him to keep access to the trust fund. I'm wondering if something similar is happening to Cindy. Anyway great chapter keep them coming!!