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An Inquiry into Appetite
sandeman commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in An Inquiry into Appetite
And how will Timothy fare in Camulod? A larger community than he is used to. Surely more predatory forks who will find him more than attractive? Can Oliver keep him close? Does he want to? -
The mores of the time demanded a strict observance of what was the received and accepted ' proper' ways of engagement. It would not always be acceptable for one young man essentially living alone to receive very frequent visits from another younger man. Especially in small town society where everone of import knew one another. Interesting development.
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Frank is a man of his word ; as well as deeds. A delightful interlude. What next?
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The saddest thing in this chapter was the last sentence. But we have all "put on faces" to cope with life. It's moving on and how we do it that matters; not the faces we've used and discarded along the way. Owen will find his own way to acceptance and love. A great story in the making.
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Devin's light is the brightness of a divinity, enfolding, encompassing, embracing. The beautiful flashback illuminates the purity of the love Luka had/has for Devin in all his innocence. Now Devin's light is rekindling and reinforcing that pure love fighting to free itself from the control of the darkness that is the soul of Theron.
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The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
sandeman commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Is splitting our heroes an attempt by their enemy to divide and conquer? Have Vince and Jack (bless him) really acquired helpmeets? Has Theo finally conquered his fears? Tune in next time for a further thrilling episode .... of a great adventure! -
Owen dips his toes into the app. Cole might be the one now or later. But as the saying goes 'One swallow does not make a Summer'.
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Gentle kisses and declarations of love. Oliver's revelations show him having experienced more than exchanging kisses! Timothy anxious about Oliver leaving but trusting he will find a way of keeping them together still maintaining the propriety necessary to protect their families' reputations. Great story.
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Erotic and funny. Is not this the way condoms have always been tested?
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Well !well! Loving how the narrative is developing ; how Frank's gentler(?) side is being brought out; and the team growth and acceptance of the two men's relationship. Should we now expect some startling revelations about Marc?
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Owen is totally inexperienced. At 18? His awakening to and the development of his sexuality is likely to be harsh! Or will he be one of the few who find first time love? Watching this space.
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Love the slow development of the story; of the warmness of Shirl; and the selfless caring way Jake talks of things to comfort and make Little Man aware of the love surrounding him whilst sleep helps recovery.
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It really must be love! A cake wilingly offering himself to a fork! But why Oliver's apprehension at the barn's doorway ? Is Oliver hiding something about the barn and the smell of death therein?
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One happy Father's Day. One happy father enjoying an unexpected gift from his son. Great fun.
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Loving the way the story is slowly developing with the frisson of danger in the relationship of Timothy and Oliver. Both wanting but wary.
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Typical Bavarian Breakfast
sandeman commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Typical Bavarian Breakfast
Frank is still the dominant boss!! Interesting development in their sexual relationship though. What else does Frank have in the closet? -
Timothy now attracts forks, most probably will want to consume him. Interesting that Clarentine smells lemon meringue from Timothy. Has Oliver already marked T as his? Will he reconnect with him? More importantly will he or can he offer him protection? And love?
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Frank's gentler approach to life and love seems genuine; but can a leopard change its spots overnight? Is Marc right to feel apprehensive?
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Oh my, Timothy! You may well hope to escape from Oliver but a cake is a cake and a fork has now revealed itself to you. I hope that this will develop into romance and love rather than anything more distressing.
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" I was beginning to discern his wants - his appetites....I was observing peculiarities not entirely proper. " There must come a point at which I shall fall into a swoon with expectations of delight. But not too soon! Continue this elegant build-up to seduction. But who is seducing whom?
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Frank is the boss, and he does need to be authoritative. But Josh hits the nail on the head telling Frank that he can get more out of his staff by being the guy Mark sees when they are off the clock. That this relationship is good for Frank personally and for business. How will Mark, who is rightly upset accept new overtures from Frank ?
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"What Are You Up To?"
sandeman commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "What Are You Up To?"
I am in awe, continually amazed by the story and the way you blend poetry into your prose. This is a tale of resurrection and of redemption. I have no doubt that in Theron/Luka/Enzo it will be the hearts of Luka/Enzo that will come to the fore to recognise the love Devin has for the man he lost and now has found. Even if the eyes are a different colour. Paulo Coelho " The eyes are the mirror of the soul and reflect everything that seems to be hidden; and like a mirror, they also reflect the person looking into them." And there must surely be redemption from Heaven for the Morningstar ? -
What a delightful period piece of manners and mores this is developing into. In keeping with the period, I trust that Oliver's intentions towards Timothy are "honourable".
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Two Spirits ranch a physical and spiritual haven for wounded things. As the story of the Little Man develops I am sure we shall also be witnessing the unfolding of Jake's tale.
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This story gets even more amazing. But love as always the interplay between Vince and Jack.
