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Okay I just turned 19 and graduated from high school, I had a crappy english teacher who didn't teach grammer she started in the middle of the lessons which totally got me lost and I failed. You know how alot of people say they can't unerstand math? It's the same thing for me with Grammer, even though I love to write it's my passion i just don't get grammer it's like forign to me. So when I post stories here I have made it my goal to find an editor before I post and I have found one, Thank you Night owl for taking the time in helping me out. I don't think half of you know how hard it is to write a story that you really want to see it in writing. First 1. You have your story line 2 your plot 3. character devolment (You have to plan there thoughts, there actions, there familes and friends etc..) 4. You have to have an imagination and think of something that's never been done before (Which is hard for me because all the stories I wanna write about have already been done before) 5. Like a fairytale you have to have some termoil in the story including a climax. On top of all this brainstorming you need the grammer, spelling everything you'd expect from an english teacher. One thing I can't stand is when a reviewer complains about small errors and then goes and reviews another saying "One thing I like about your story is you have perfect grammer and spelling, well done." But they say nothing about the story itself if they liked it or not. Authors are taking the time out of there day to write a story for the enjoyment of doing so and for your entertainment, it sucks when you have no clue if people are enjoying the story or not so they know there not waisting there time doing it. When all you do is complain it brings you down and if you try to improve and they still complain well I don't know about you but it makes feel like nobody's enjoying the story so I just give up and write it for me. All I ask is before you review a story don't head straight to the mistakes tell them what you think of it and if it's not an inconvience tell them the mistakes they did make in PRIVATE maybe through an email, because of course we need to hear what mistakes we've made so we can go back and fix them but do it in private please. That would be awesome!

Sure Lacey I bet the song stays with you? jk

i shall take your advice im bad at going straight to the sex or drama scene and if im not there yet i kinda get bored writing the thing, but imma try your tip

I don't see a problem you could use those ages but just don't put to much detail into the sex scenes.

depends on there age group alot of people has said they don't mind sixteen and older when i asked but you could right stories with younger age group but with less sexual activity, you know detailed. And your BIG writing is no problem

You can write about teens too but there strict on adult/child stories it might get reported if you do but high school stories your fine.

Hope you have a wonderful day HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Alright so I've figured out which stories just press my button weather its high school/ college either both That I find I love the main charectors to be small and the boyfriend to be possesive/dominate I just got through reading a novel I bought that's called: A bit rough and roughhousing. The main charector was 5'7 and once he described his future boyfriend the other guy was 6'0 or somewhere in there. It didn't matter if they were in there thirties there size got me hooked lol idk why. If you know any stories like i just described please give me a list wether it be from Nifty, here or anywhere or just tell me your favorites?

Ahh come on you know it's not the pineapple your in love with, all that arguing you and Lacey do no way it's Bob Pineapple it's Lacey your utterly in love with

Happy birthday

Happy birthday my twin from another mother

Thank you guys

Is this real?

Hey at least there trying, high school didn't fail they stuck up for there rights and it's awesome too see people fighting back for what they believe in. It may not succedd in winning over the hatred that priest has but it gives hope of what the future may bring from the next generation. Most of the bigots are from the golden days when they where taught homosexuality was a sin and they taught it too there kids who either choose too follow there parents or go there own way and stand up for whats right, there best friends that are gay or a relative that they adore. Like I said these kids may not have changed the heart of that baptist family but there giving hope of change. Take a look at this http://www.stoppingthehate.com/News-Article1302_Nate_Phelps_Estranged_Son_Of_Fred_Phelps_Speaks_Out_Publicly.htm

Lol'z there was a girl in my english class in high school who kept texting the whole period when we had a sub that day and she didnt notice him standing over her and it scared her half to death and she's all "Just let me finish this text!" But he was a well known sub around the school for being a cool dude and broke all the school rules these were his : "You can listen to your music while you do your work, you can text as long as I don't see the phone." But i couldn't stand the strict teachers were you forgot too turn your ringer off and they'd just demand them even if it was in your back pack and where some nosy ones would actually look threw your phone and you couldn't do shiz about it because of the rules... Yeah it is disrespectful too keep texting when your standing right there I would have grabbed the ruler and smacked the kids desk with it to get there attention lol

Have a fantastic birthday Drew

Congrats, that's totally awesome *Sniffs, smells romance in the air*

Can't wait for Gone From Daylight there teeth has sunk into my neck and hasn't let go

To much work

I try my best when I write my stories, I wasn't very good at english in high school either. Grammer has always been a big issue for me it's like a different language for me so I have to go searching for editors for it to make some since But on forums I don't care how I spell, Like when I see people arguing on the internet there usual first response is... 'can't you spell?' The forum is supposed to be a fun place, not to be graded on grammer. One website I was banned because I misspelled and my grammer wasn't to good (and I didn't think that was fair.) If I perhaps mis spell and don't use grammer in the forums forgive me, but this isn't a classroom XD Plus not just authors in here make mistakes in this area.

For cellphones! It's how I get ahold of family members that live across the world where as my home phone can't do that. When my internet gets screwy i can easily access it on my phone. I usually get stuck trying to think of something to say to a friend when talking into the phone but you can have a random conversation over a text and it won't be strange. And don't start with 'teenagers only love this crap' because my 72 year old grandmother uses hers and my mom had started texting and likes it so

I have expierence with this, My dad had horrible anger issues when i was a kid and used to beat my mom. He even beat her when she was pregnant with me. It made me afraid to go home. Since then he has got anger managment but still calls her a 'sissy' I think it's wrong on all levels and the other way as well. My sister in law used to smack my brother around so i think it's wrong both ways.

I have this same problem, won't let me post videos either.

Can't wait for them dude, you'll love it here

Jsmith