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Hamen Cheese

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  1. Well, it is narrated by Derek - sometimes the world simply revolves around him and only him. Hehe. Names do have power. For instance, it's amazing how "gay" can be different from "queer" or even the "f" word. It's even more amazing how powerful they can be among kids. As for Derek finding out, that's the big question now is it. Knowing how Derek thinks of these things, what will happen when his perfect world comes crashing down. Will he simply turn over a new leaf? Something tells me it won't be that simple. Thanks for continuing to read. I appreciate your comments.
  2. Thanks! Crossing my fingers that you like the rest.
  3. Thanks and I hope you enjoy reading the rest.
  4. Hamen Cheese

    EPILOGUE

    Thank you Thommy-Lee. I appreciate hearing that. And yes, I do intend to continue the story, possibly after my other story "Charlie" is finished. Check that out too. Perhaps you'll like it also despite the genre being different.
  5. CHAPTER 5: I Am NOT Gay Lucas Crawford was evil. If you don't believe me, you will by the time I've told you everything. You remember Luke right? He’s that idiot basketball player that I had to deal with, the one who made all those crude remarks about fags being in the arts table. Yeah, that’s the one. As a basketball player, he had to train like everyone else during our Saturday training sessions. Unlike our usual training though, every sport was pretty much in the gym on Saturday. On weekday
  6. Happy Birthday!
  7. Always, without a doubt - open the refrigerator.
  8. Jennifer Love Hewitt - I would have settled for her as my wife.
  9. Thanks. I like her too.
  10. Times are changing my friend. "Usage Discussion of CAN" http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/can But thanks though for reading.
  11. Thanks for reading! And yes, I plan to write more of it.
  12. CHAPTER 4: I Seeng a Soong fo Chaalee Not knowing has got to be the most annoying thing in the world. You know that feeling you get when something’s at the tip of your tongue but you just can’t put the right words to it? You know that overwhelming excitement when you’re at the precipice of understanding something, yet it eludes you at the very last moment? You get so angry when stuff like that happens because you know you know it but you just can’t remember that word, or the title of that son
  13. Well some of them are different for sure but I'm not sure different is always a good thing. It's like my view on a lot of abstract art - such as the type that looks like the painter just accidentally spilled paint on a canvas just before slipping on a wet patch on the floor and falling butt first on the painting. There are some I like of course but a lot of the times I just go "okaaay..."
  14. Hamen Cheese

    Born

    Nah. I don't really have a beer belly. I actually don't like beer. Just thought it would be funny.
  15. Hamen Cheese

    Born

    I wish I wasn't born with a beer belly (I swear it was there from the beginning).
  16. I like a lot of her songs but no she doesn't inspire me. TBH, some of her videos are a bit disturbing.
  17. Happy Birthday.
  18. Still hoping for the best.
  19. CHAPTER 3: Trouble in Paradise I still haven’t told you about Charlie’s wet dream, have I? Well, he didn’t exactly tell me that he was dreaming about me. But, I thought that it was a perfectly logical and acceptable assumption to arrive at. It was kinda funny, really, how it happened. It was during one of the nights Charlie slept over at my house. You know that awkward stage that everyone else goes through as they get older? You know that point where the body suddenly gets a growth spurt almo
  20. Thanks! There will be more soon.
  21. CHAPTER 2: Charlie’s Interest in Art So where was I? Let’s see. I’ve discussed how Charlie and I met, how I rescued Charlie from the big bad man… err, boy… how Charlie was like as we grew up, how perfect I was, how Charlie moved in next door, how Charlie had a wet dream about me… Wait, I haven’t covered that, have I? Of course, I haven’t. I’d know if I did because I remember everything. That incident actually happened much, much later but I’ll pick up from where I left off so that it’s cle
  22. Hamen Cheese

    Charlie

    Thanks Nephy! Yeah, it's a resurrected story hehe. I only got as far as Chapter 3 back then. This time though I'm intending to finish it.
  23. Haha. Yes, I remember that review. I still have a copy of it from efiction written 10/10/2010. I managed to copy and paste the reviews before efiction went down. Like I said back then, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
  24. Hey Marzipan! I actually posted the first three chapters of this several months ago. I started writing it then but my computer gave out on me and I lost a lot of the text I already wrote. That coupled with more responsibilities at work stopped me from writing for awhile. I continued writing this story after I finished Adamagika. Some details were added to the earlier chapters while others were completely lost because I only recovered very early drafts. Those are some of "the changes". Mostly though, the story is still the same as I thought of it all those months ago. Hope you enjoy the rest.
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