tabaqui
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After re-reading it, some things that i noticed. Linc has earned his Squad Tattoo after his dive for Liebe. Going after the most precious thing and after that getting the offer to stay with them back home. Diego Sol will never get off Cj's poop list. Chatri and the Dads showing up was kinda expected after searching for a plane that was traveling from the US to MEX, that was probably a fun conversation at the doc's office after they found out Good of CJ & Ozzie to take such care of their nanny and Elpido's mother. And off course Trip get's an interview and they call an crazy cliffhanging author for weed? CJ&Ozzie make a good team. Loved this book and the way it was written. Well done Carlos
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Very nice ending. Will read it again later to process it all.
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always fun in this family. Wondering what Jake is going to do.
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both are fun and have their pro's and con's A cliffie every chapter put's the expectations very high because you have to continue once you start doing it every time. and the occasional one is the waiting for which chapter is he going to use it.
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for the record I totally agree with the 24h time limit. More time to digest a chapter, or complain to an author about this goat running arounds on cliffs.🤣
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Carlos has earned a big one with a 3 year party
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so true, if only for that post
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Been there, done that with Circumnavigation. Found the story after chapter 4 or something. Not only do you space them out you made us wait years instead of days/weeks..... ahhh, I was just starting to like him, can't you write a nice little background chapter about him, just for us fans? And who do we need to bribe to lift the 24h wait?
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hmm, someone has finally created his cliffy and he does it this way 🤯 what a way to pass a certain goat. Can't wait to hear about Northman his reaction when he hears about the kidnapping 😇 Hit that button for the next chapter!
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great chapter, love how chipper treats Liebe and wondering when here first instrument is bought Gotta love Uncle Chipper and feeling sorry, not sorry for the wake up call of Ozzy tomorrow
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noooonooooo 🤯, you can't give out some many early doses of CJ, my CJ addiction can't handle this. But wondering who has touched the safe and why the Chinese use CJ to out a spy.
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excellent chapter, had to re-read this morning. Love you ending
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have to agree with you on this one Carlos is more subtle if he's using a cliff to hang on.
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one son-father explosion coming up
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great chapter, couldn't stop my tears when they arrived at the place of the accident
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CJ's family life in one sentence. Just read the last one in this chapter excellent Sunday read.
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A classic Earth day story from Carlos. Lovely children story
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Great chapter and great trip. Congrats on chapter 300 in the boomers collection
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wow, what a chapter. don't know where to begin after thinking it over during dinner so I don't. Great writing!
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Ahh, so the earth day story is your gift for the party 🥰 and no comment on the rest of the fine mess I found for you🤐
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seems Lazy? says the writer who has written 299 chapters in his Boomers, Gen Xers, & Millenials universe with an average word count of 3900 didn't want to split the count in cj & the squad+ Since the next one will be chapter 300 are we getting a party? more like proper planning and creating more depth.
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One more vote I love long chapters
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Great chapter, love the fills from cadet and cj's pov on some chats
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What do you expect for the guy who gets CJ to the oscars? Off course he's going to be populair
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another very nice chapter. Thinking Carter will be doing a lot of work for CJ after when he's done playing around as a a clerk and ambassador. Still can't get over a nice Stephen. and Sir Kent will be somewhere high on the dial list for insights or just nice advice
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