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after 3 chapters in I'm hooked. Why didn't I find this earlier
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great chapter and well blended in with the other parts.
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and another great chapter that is superb written
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Part Three – Piano Lessons – Larry
tabaqui commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Part Three – Piano Lessons – Larry
great writing as usual from you. Looking forward to read more about my favourite New Yorkers -
You are killing us with the details on what happened in Mexico, but great chapter for the rest
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Nice Sunday evening bonus. Thanks Carlos. Hope Miranda get's her shit together soon so she and Ritchie will talk about it.
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so your next story is somewhere 20 chapters with 60k word length? just to test out if we are happy then with the chapter length
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For once I'm going to say the chapter length felt right only thinking about Cesar's reaction to Ritchie's language about pussy is scaring me already, only what will Miranda think about Ritchie hitting on the bartender? Looking forward to next week
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German car for the German flyboy, fitting Love the family interaction with Melissa
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Cadet Third Class • III
tabaqui commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • III
Destroying Defiant? That’s almost the same as killing a character. Ballsy move Carlos. But a great chapter again. Love the player attitude of Ritchie -
Cadet Fourth Class • III
tabaqui commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Fourth Class • III
great chapter again, you made me get teary eyes when Brad's legs came up during my lunch on Friday, just found the time to finish and reread the chapter So next week chapter is becoming dinner reading just to be safe Love the freedom Ritchie is getting as part of his growing up btw when did you became a word count cheater to get a 6k+ chapter 🤔 the part about Thiago moving is double -
Cadet Fourth Class • II
tabaqui commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Fourth Class • II
almost, Georgetown Roar, Thiago and then walls if you sort them on average word count according to the numbers on the site which I did below Cadet 6186 CJ: Georgetown Roar 5712,62 The Squad: Thiago 5614 CJ: Walls 5067,14 CJ: Georgetown over the rainbow 5006,12 CJ: Travels 4949,07 CJ: Autumn 4829,90 CJ: Winter 4565,61 CJ: Georgetown As Time goes by 4519 CJ: Spring 4449,18 CJ; Georgetown Goodnight my angel 4379,67 CJ: Summer 3326,30 The Squad: Ranger 2878,69 CJ: Ripper Christman 2860,5 Chelsea tales: Woof: 2417,25 CJ Hunting Season 2008 CJ: hail to the chief 1704 CJ Thin blue Line 1486 Chelsea tales: Prime: 1411,8 The Squad: Singer 1000,03 -
Cadet Fourth Class • II
tabaqui commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Fourth Class • II
what do you think I did in last years autumn to get a CJ universe fix? Binge read every story you have written and then continued on to a story from a certain goat. keept me sane -
Cadet Fourth Class • II
tabaqui commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Fourth Class • II
It not only sound familiar I know for sure it's the same one we read about in an other Carlos story -
Cadet Fourth Class • II
tabaqui commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Fourth Class • II
nononononononononononono, just NO on the short stories 🙂, you know how I think of them. Have to check but so far they feel longer than what I can remember in length it was a pleasant suprise to see a chapter today -
Cadet Fourth Class • II
tabaqui commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Fourth Class • II
Great chapter, even took a longer lunch break to finish reading it a few hours ago. love the little details about the other story’s -
Great chapter, love the details in it to get a feel what life as a cadet is. have to reread it again after dinner since the first read was in between the spare moments at work. Lunch was to short today to finish it
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Yeah, the post I've been waiting for for months What a great chapter to start a new story and a new year. Looking forward to read more about Ritch(ie)
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Like the writing style so far, looking forward for more
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Are you crazy? Creating a program to let me/us get rid of our addiction to your stories and characters? No way, just NO!!!!. Just keep feeding us, that feels way better. (this sound like a real addict now I realise🤪) how many days/week do we have to wait this time? gotta know if I have to reread something in between 🤣
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nononononono, this can't be the end.... I need more, my addiction needs to be fed every week. Great story again Carlos. Thanks for the entertainment
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Can I help loading the truck? what a douche and loved the way you described him.
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you don't get to be captain without being hard
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love this, Brett on a mission to reclaim his art and house
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Yeah, new work from Carlos what a good surprise to start a new month
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