Agaith

Nephy your comments are a pleasure to read. I am so glad you enjoy my story so much :)I aim to keep improving :)Actually it's Dargon that scatters the commas for editing but Frosty would do the same I imagine ;)With the matter of sex, I hope im making it quite realistic, with Matt and what he's been through taking his time. And Dan, if every boyfriend was like him then I dont think anyone would ever break up :DThanks for reading!

Um Nephy...sorry but Dan isn't you I hope you dont mind me stealing your line lol I always love your comments I love the bow as a weapon as well, the description of the battle of Agincourt, had me hooked on them. There's something elegant and yet powerful about a longbow And I am SOO sorry about the lack of sex scenes but Matt isnt there yet lol. (Here's a slight hint... watch this space) Thanks for commenting Nephy

This is what my hair decided to do over the course of the day And this doesnt mean I am a horny devil

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CURTI! ENJOY IT YOU DESERVE IT

I'm Agaith, and I've been a book sniffer for a number of years. I suppose my favourite combination is when I have a brand new leather bookmark and slip it into a brand new book and sniff both together...hmmm so relaxing......................oh sorry I drifted off there but there's a little bit about my book sniffing habits.

I'm gonna deviate a little into poetry before I talk about my story because how my poetry and story comes together is vastly different When it comes to poetry, its like a little light bulb comes on and nearly the entire poem is in my mind and I write it down. With a story, I have a bare bones idea of where I want the story to go. How it gets there is totally random and I never use a plan, I feel a plan is too constricitve for me, especially as I have ideas sprouting off as I write something anyway hehe. So two different approaches to my writing

well the idea I have is to stay in my house in reading that i will live in next uni year. then I could just travel into London from there. There is no way I can afford a hotel, so its house or nothing lol lets hope i can use my plan haha

There might be a way I can get to the meet by spending minimal money...we'll wait and see.

That was excellent Frosty Definitely build on this snippet of fiction

I know its a long ways off but its actually looking like a no from me guys

it was supposed to start with 're' Ara anyway.... Shameful

I find myself instantly disliking Andy, maybe because I'd hate it if what happened in this chapter was done to me. Really enjoyed the chapter though I aim to read on

because you just decided to go and try and break it im going to use Nd as the chemical symbol. So my word is Neodymium

I think we need the beginnings of ominous music for the next few chapters then And why does it have to get worse? Oh I know because it's a Nephy story hehe I can't wait for the next chapter...unless the surprise is not going to go down well then it will be a bit ooh err. Thanks Nephy

Ok, first up, if this question is supposed to be in a different area then I apologise now. My question is this: I have my story, Seeing Double which is currently going well but I also have another story idea based around Seeing Double. It would be based on Galwrock but no directly involve Matt or Dan (the two main characters of Seeing Double). The storyline however would run parallel to Seeing Double. Would, considering that info, this new story I have planned be a Spin- off or a Sequel? I would love to hear your thoughts Thanks

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Poor Silver, I can empathise with him bt not sympathise as I have never been through and hope to never go through anything like that. Me saying how hard it must be for him is as obvious and as pointless as saying that there are many stars in the sky and then trying to count them all. It's still going to get worse I know, but I always have fingers crossed just in case... :PThanks Nephy

Um I really have to echo the title of the thread Made me laugh though lol

Well...wow. Um I cant add anything else here that I didnt say in the review lol, my brain is sad its over So I'll just say I loved this story so so much And for the next story... 'She-Sha, She-Sha, (Un)masked come soon!' Thank you so much Anyta

But....but...but I answered 2 out of 4! That's getting better right? And as for those new questions.. you wish you knew

As you have added your voice again to the format of the chapters I will, when time permits, get around to that. The differnt use of speech marks is, in my opinion, a point I will not bother taking on board because that is rarely a subtle difference. If you notice I use both sets because I have people speaking telepathically and verbally hence the usage of both. I will strive to improve my vocabulary though there are only so many ways of saying something without adding in a rarely used word to mean the same thing. And even with all the text books, doesnt make you a perfect writer, I will strive to make the story better and will point your review out to Dargon and Frosty

where did the 'gy' come from?

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Ok Andy there will be a few non comittal answer and some actual answers In relation to your first two questions... I can only say that those questions will be answered most likely further on hehe ( first non comittal answer of the post) Matt was human before he underwent the transformation, he then went back to live on Earth. The question concerning Mistress A ( or Ailarha ) I will explain here: Each of the Lords and Ailarha is in charge of a particular house. When the position of planets change, so does the balance of Energy towards a particular house. In this way the house with the greatest gift of Energy at any one point allows the leader of that house to take charge if the other Lords agree the leader is fit to lead. If not...they settle it by non lethal challenges as to who takes charge. Final set of questions...sorry another non committal answer lol, can't say too much at this point. Thanks for reading Andy ( and I hope I'm getting better at avoid...I mean answering questions )

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