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--==Tom’s POV==-- Chuckling, I imagined Mitch sitting there on the edge of the pool, steam coming out of his ears, probably thinking that the water he’d just been in had once been sullied with horndog jizz from a couple of very randy boys. Which would actually be true; we had done some creative things in that pool, Kit and me. Ah, good memories. I remember experimenting, in those days. Well, those and days from much longer ago. ********** I was 13 when I woke up one night wit
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--==Mitchell’s POV==-- When I arrived home, my mind was a jumble of thoughts, not in the least because while in the Uber, I looked up ‘third-date rule’. I’d basically, and wholeheartedly, agreed to us having sex on a third date. The moment I read the explanation on the screen of my phone and what it implied, the images that came in my mind were so vivid and real that my breath halted. Lord, I hadn’t had an erotic thought like that in years. Scratch that; downright pornographic.
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Love Jonas, well written cutesy of an innocent boy, and no more than that, and well mannered. Leave him be or I'ma come after you. 😈 As for Robin; some parents should not ever have become that. Period. Too many crave children and can't have them; way too many have them, and shouldn't. Bah, ugh, brr, pfft! (well written, if you evoke such emotion)
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You touch upon my main hesitance; I hd to get past that myself, before I began writing it.
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Horse never lie. I'd call Connor an Earthling. Horsewhisperer, perhaps?
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Seeing as this story has to do with shifters, I'm wondering why people are surprised...
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Oh, just be quiet, you...
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The animals get a place of honor here, I like that.
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Cute; when Harry met Sally. Did Sally do the restaurant scene? At any moment? At all? Please?
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I knew some would catch that...
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Oh goody, someone with an open mind...😂
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Aww, Connor is a sweetheart. I like the he invests himself into his future, even an unknown one, deferring to his parents' advice.
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Like I've just been told: Shush. Shhhh... quiet...calm...relax...WAY more coming. 😂
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Consider me educated! Woohoo!!
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Go figure; I wasn't even trying to be clever. 😂
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I was conflicted about that line, but kept it in. None of the editors raised an issue about it, though. I did like the line, even if it's skirting the edge of 'is he still thinking of Kit in that way or...'. He isn't, btw.
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--==Tom’s POV==-- Alright, so maybe not fuck you, Kit. Maybe not. When Mitch asked me for a second date, I almost pissed myself. So he was interested. Oh man, that felt pretty good, when he asked that. Hell yes! I even heard him holding his breath; waiting for me to answer with that cool ‘I'd love to’. I was proud of that, sounding so calm while inside, my heart skipped a beat. First he’d surprised me by taking my ciggy and smoking it with me. Those fuckin’ bastards! Taylan and Ki
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Thank you! I hope you will all enjoy what is coming up. It should be a lot of fun, seeing how everyone responds.
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--==Mitchell’s POV==-- That thought lingered for a long time as I sat there waiting for Tomás to return. There were a lot of thoughts that entered my mind. Thoughts like how much I enjoyed this dinner. The effortless conversation. The absence of the need to impress which, perhaps, fell to the previous connection I had with him, but that connection had never been like this; on equal footing. A man speaking to another man. Previously, I had been ‘the father’ speaking to his son’s boyfriend. A
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Oh,we don't get those here in Holland. Do send me a pvt link to it? 😉
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Aww, thank you! As for edits/proofreading, I may take you up on that. I gave it to the editor three weeks ago. Something may have happened, or vacation, I dunno. 🤷♂️ 😉
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--==Tom’s POV==-- Great. Just great. I had to open my big yap again and say what I thought. Making my way to the toilets, my mind was going at a million miles a second. Why did he have to be so great, fuck. I hadn’t expected this guy. Mitch. Ever since he walked in, I’d seen a man that became more and more attractive as the evening progressed. The flirting happened pretty quick, I just couldn’t help myself. I like what I see and I start that shit; I can’t stop when the response is s
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What happened, in short, was that there used to be a story about Mischa & Kit. But I got stuck with the history of Kit and Tom. So, to figure it out, I started another story, to see what might've happened. That story took over, which is this one, and it easily flowed whereas with Kit & Mischa, it didn't. I needed someone to kick the bucket, and Taylan became the obvious choice. I abandoned the Kit/Mischa story and knitted it throughout here, told from Mitchell's and Tom's pov. And suddenly that worked. I gained way more material than I could've used for two separate stories. I easily wrote half of the whole thing in a week. If something gives you a headache, it's telling you you're on the wrong track. 😉
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Ugh, tell me about it. When 20, tight in all the right places and nimble. 30 years later, you're getting up with subtitles. *Groan* *moan*
