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You'd be surprised how easy it was/is! I'm happily typing away, lol.

Ooooh, we are the same day, then. I re-read the whole thing, to get back into their mindset. Corrected done stuff along the way, that'll be referred to in the next story. Lot of details to keep track of.

Lol, might differ a day: yours is the 5th? Glad to be back and writing. Next chapter is already done, but I'm not posting it until next week. Giving myself time to get ahead. 😄

CHAPTER 52 --==Kit’s POV==-- “Can you do the noose?” Tom growled. Dressed in a mid-gray herringbone track stripe suit, Tom Ford if my eye didn’t deceive me, and a light-blue shirt, he came over with a dark blue Grenadine tie, throwing his jacket on the bed. His hair was still wet from the shower and he smelled very nice! It was a scent I hadn’t smelled before, some new cologne he’d gotten with Taylan on their shopping spree. Taking it, I had him move in front of the mirror and slo

I just should stop promising. Seriously, 4 years later...yikes! 😂 But I am writing on this again. As said elsewhere, taking my time. Also writing on the sequels, it's a one big jumble in my head.

Quite right. I edited that out, and reworded some lines here and there. Any clerk would've walked out at being called names and rightly so. It's still rude but I hope it now reads not as offensive as it was. I thought, upon re-reading it was too offensive as well, and uncalled for. I am busy writing on this story some more and you touched on another point in your comment, which I will address. 🙏

😘 Thanks! I remember you!

Ahoy! See the user feedback on the main page of this story!

Well, well....hello there! 5 years later, I return and to my deep shame, I see that this story is still not finished. My sincere apologies. However, I have news: - I am writing again. The joy I found in writing disappeared for a long while. A very long while, yes. It has returned, since about a month ago and I spent much of my three-week vacation writing, after first re-reading this one. And then it just...began again. The joy in writing had returned and I wrote from dusk till dawn, about two weeks straight. An idea formed and resulted in hundreds of pages, to be exact. And I found I wasn't done with these characters. So: - I'm planning to expand this story with one more installment, making this a trilogy series instead of a two-parter; - The 3rd is actually almost complete, about 3/4 done, and you're not going to see that one coming ; - One other story formed in my head while writing, went on that tangent for a while and it's about halfway. So here I am again. Chapter 52 is coming soon enough, but not today. Just know that you can expect it in the near future. And I will not be using the pace I previously did. I want stories finished now, before I start posting. Take my time. I've done my George RR Martin stint.

Avoided, mostly. I got caught a few times, and just took the verbal crappola.

Fixed! 2 years later. lol!

THAW=The House Always Wins, and yes another failfest of mine. ;-)

I did? I haven't edited it again, but I don't see where I went wrong. And can we take this to pm's instead of here? I don't mind criticism, at all, but it tends to clog up chapter comments.

Do you mean to tell me Google Translate is WRONG!??! Say it isn't so! Lol. Thank you, it's been changed. That's what you get when you have a Dutchy writing in languages other than his own. 😛

LOL! My editor didn't catch that! Very good! They're brown, yes.

Yes, I will be continuing but not in the mood to write, currently. And I need to be, or it'll become stilted and unflowing.

Correct you are. One of the best movies to ' steal' from. Perhaps read on and see a reference. Not so much in name, but he confirms it is not his own.

This story was written in 2004, republished here in 2010, a long time ago. Some of it is not okay, but I chose not to alter it. It's not my best, that's certainly clear.

A pity you choose to not read onward, the best is yet to come, but I can respect it when someone who picks a story with subject matter in it he (or she) does object to, tries and gives an effort, and is honest about their feelings. Thank you for reading it so far.

Aww, you're sweet. Well, there is one unfinished: Confounded II. It will be finished, but not when there's a heatwave plaguing Europe. Too busy lounging in the pool with a cool bevvy.

Such a male, isn't he?

Yes, i am going to continue. But with this current heatwave in Holland, 30+ expected, i don't feel like sitting indoors in a hot room, clobbering on a keyboard. Nor do I have the inspiration to write atm. But I've not forgotten.

Thank you! Aww, and thank you as well, for reading. For a while, some thought it would go there, but that was never intended.

Not planning on that. Sorry. Thank you! Oh dear, I'm sorry for making you stay up so late, lol! As for the kids, I find it is more fun to let the readers themselves fill in such gaps, like movies without a sequel, fantasizing as to how it may continue. Obviously, nothing should happen in front, or even in earshot, of the kids. Think Offices/Outdoors/Hotels/Semi-Public areas. As mentioned above, there's no plans to expand on this story.

And of course a big thank you to @Timothy M. and @BlindAmbition for their great help, proofreading and editing!