Andr0gene
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Fixed! 2 years later. lol!
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THAW=The House Always Wins, and yes another failfest of mine. ;-)
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I did? I haven't edited it again, but I don't see where I went wrong. And can we take this to pm's instead of here? I don't mind criticism, at all, but it tends to clog up chapter comments.
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Do you mean to tell me Google Translate is WRONG!??! Say it isn't so! Lol. Thank you, it's been changed. That's what you get when you have a Dutchy writing in languages other than his own. 😛
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LOL! My editor didn't catch that! Very good! They're brown, yes.
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Yes, I will be continuing but not in the mood to write, currently. And I need to be, or it'll become stilted and unflowing.
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Correct you are. One of the best movies to ' steal' from. Perhaps read on and see a reference. Not so much in name, but he confirms it is not his own.
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This story was written in 2004, republished here in 2010, a long time ago. Some of it is not okay, but I chose not to alter it. It's not my best, that's certainly clear.
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A pity you choose to not read onward, the best is yet to come, but I can respect it when someone who picks a story with subject matter in it he (or she) does object to, tries and gives an effort, and is honest about their feelings. Thank you for reading it so far.
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Aww, you're sweet. Well, there is one unfinished: Confounded II. It will be finished, but not when there's a heatwave plaguing Europe. Too busy lounging in the pool with a cool bevvy.
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Such a male, isn't he?
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Yes, i am going to continue. But with this current heatwave in Holland, 30+ expected, i don't feel like sitting indoors in a hot room, clobbering on a keyboard. Nor do I have the inspiration to write atm. But I've not forgotten.
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Thank you! Aww, and thank you as well, for reading. For a while, some thought it would go there, but that was never intended.
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Not planning on that. Sorry. Thank you! Oh dear, I'm sorry for making you stay up so late, lol! As for the kids, I find it is more fun to let the readers themselves fill in such gaps, like movies without a sequel, fantasizing as to how it may continue. Obviously, nothing should happen in front, or even in earshot, of the kids. Think Offices/Outdoors/Hotels/Semi-Public areas. As mentioned above, there's no plans to expand on this story.
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And of course a big thank you to @Timothy M. and @BlindAmbition for their great help, proofreading and editing!
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Awww. Well, it was very satisfying to press "completed", I can tell you that.
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Thank you so much! And thanks for reading.
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EPILOGUE June 30th, 2016, Greenwich, CT. “Junior! Let your brother walk on his own, he’s perfectly capable,” I called out, watching as the 4-year-old put his two year younger brother down. Luka, gaining traction, ran off like a small whirlwind, laughing and screaming as his elder brother immediately went into pursuit after him. “A bit too capable, if you ask me.” Moving to get up and give chase myself, I was held back by an arm sliding around me. “Let him run. Maybe he’ll get tir
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Actually, I'm allowed to post it, it's been more than 8 hrs, so....gimme 5 mins.
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Because that's the story I wanted to tell, lol! I haven't even contemplated further interactions between these two. But i'm writing two others; I have to finish Confounded II and I'm writing a fantasy/sci-fi tale. But that one won't see the light of day for years to come, I think.
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CHAPTER 29 July 4th, 2011, Greenwich, CT. I never expected to end up happy. Until I met Mr. Montgomery, my life had been a culmination of failures and bad decisions, ultimately causing a resignation to only reach a so-so life, not thinking I’d even deserve any degree of happiness, considering the crap I’d pulled. Ridiculous perhaps but when you go dark, it’s hard to see any light, let alone love. Yet now I was. Disgustingly happy, even. There was light and if there came any more love
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Bwahahaha!!!! I'm off the hook! w00t!
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Alright, final chapter AND the epilogue have been sent off!
