Andr0gene
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Correct. I used to have a partner that did it; only we knew where they were. In summer, he got quite...creative with placement.
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I know, right! I'm a nurse and mostly work nights. Sometimes evenings; I have 2 coming up this month, the first in almost 9 months, lol. I never work days. I said that at my contract negotiation, made it a bit of a 'accept that request or see me walk'.
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I think he would have! I would.
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The following morning Greg woke me early; being used to rising around seven, 5:30am proved to be a bit too much. No one should be as energetic at that hour as Gregory Montgomery. Sensing that I wasn't yet fully awake he announced he was gonna go for a run and asked me to arrange for breakfast to be brought to the room. I didn’t remember that as an option, the last time I was here. Normally, guests had to go downstairs for it. “We'll pay,” he answered dismissively, changing into his running
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Not too long. We're about 3/4 through.
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I sent you a pm with the link
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I read through it again as well, today; oof, there are some cringing moments. I don't like Mark so much, which is strange since I wrote it mostly from his point of view. I must've been in a pretty weird place, writing him that way. Fickle as all f***. As stories of mine go, this one ranks as the lowest in liking, to me. The best one I like to date is THAW, with The Butler gaining on it at superspeed to replace it as favorite. Thanks for re-reading!
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I just finished reading this again. Parts of it made me cringe. Parts made me want to delete whole sections. There are good characters, but the structure runs off the track further on. All I can say is bear with it, muddle through. Apparently i did when writing it, yikes, lol. Then again, it's from 2004.
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LOL! I am reading it again as well, this story, and i see a lot of similarities with other stories of mine. Gloria though, I haven't written anyone like her again. She's funny.
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A good thing then, that Old Mr. Montgomery happened by.
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“World War III? Hmm, I’ve seen you go nuclear before,” I said, tightening my arms around him, “You can stay.” Greg smiled and the seriousness of the moment passed. Gesturing at the clothes, I asked, “Shall I hang these?” “Yes, please.” He leaned in for another kiss. “Think you can resist doing the floor with them, while I go get the rest?” Oh, Mr. Funnybone was back, eh? “I’ll try but no promises. I did note the bathroom floor could use a little clean.” He softly laughed against my l
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There; how's that work for ya now, then?
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Still hate the format! Eww!
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Ahhh, I see where you would get that impression. No, it was never so. Greg? Top dog. Always. But Chris may....nay, I won't tell. Yet. (Pssst! new chapter up!)
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I felt surprisingly calm and relaxed, considering I just agreed on giving up my freedom. Well, okay; that was overly dramatic, I was still me and the decision to agree wasn’t made under duress or any pressure and fully mine. The world didn’t stop and Greg didn’t suddenly change into raging maniac with daddy issues, and a whip to boot. After the toast, he calmly took a sip but his body language betrayed a subtle change. And I realized he’d held his breath. “How do you feel?” He asked, se
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That's....astute. And very much what this story is. Look past Greg, and look to Chris instead, as the redeeming factor for Greg. Very astute indeed.
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You are sweet. Thank you. Love you!
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Stockholm Syndrome would apply to Chris, not Greg. Stockholm Syndrome is where the victim feels affection or trust, or even develops feelings, towards their captor.
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He's angry with himself. But the way he then handles it...tsk tsk tsk...
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Oh, i wouldn't be too sure... Kath isn't really going to be doing much in the story.
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I think you're the only one who thinks of Gregory in that way.
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Mr. Montgomery is rather lonely, and looking for a combination of friendship and employee. Which can go either very bad or very good. Basil doesn't fit the description.
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Nope, he didn't, which tells you something. The news does affect him, which throws him off balance.
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Yes, it's a mutual split.
