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Go figure; I wasn't even trying to be clever. 😂
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I was conflicted about that line, but kept it in. None of the editors raised an issue about it, though. I did like the line, even if it's skirting the edge of 'is he still thinking of Kit in that way or...'. He isn't, btw.
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--==Tom’s POV==-- Alright, so maybe not fuck you, Kit. Maybe not. When Mitch asked me for a second date, I almost pissed myself. So he was interested. Oh man, that felt pretty good, when he asked that. Hell yes! I even heard him holding his breath; waiting for me to answer with that cool ‘I'd love to’. I was proud of that, sounding so calm while inside, my heart skipped a beat. First he’d surprised me by taking my ciggy and smoking it with me. Those fuckin’ bastards! Taylan and Ki
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Thank you! I hope you will all enjoy what is coming up. It should be a lot of fun, seeing how everyone responds.
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--==Mitchell’s POV==-- That thought lingered for a long time as I sat there waiting for Tomás to return. There were a lot of thoughts that entered my mind. Thoughts like how much I enjoyed this dinner. The effortless conversation. The absence of the need to impress which, perhaps, fell to the previous connection I had with him, but that connection had never been like this; on equal footing. A man speaking to another man. Previously, I had been ‘the father’ speaking to his son’s boyfriend. A
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Oh,we don't get those here in Holland. Do send me a pvt link to it? 😉
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Aww, thank you! As for edits/proofreading, I may take you up on that. I gave it to the editor three weeks ago. Something may have happened, or vacation, I dunno. 🤷♂️ 😉
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--==Tom’s POV==-- Great. Just great. I had to open my big yap again and say what I thought. Making my way to the toilets, my mind was going at a million miles a second. Why did he have to be so great, fuck. I hadn’t expected this guy. Mitch. Ever since he walked in, I’d seen a man that became more and more attractive as the evening progressed. The flirting happened pretty quick, I just couldn’t help myself. I like what I see and I start that shit; I can’t stop when the response is s
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What happened, in short, was that there used to be a story about Mischa & Kit. But I got stuck with the history of Kit and Tom. So, to figure it out, I started another story, to see what might've happened. That story took over, which is this one, and it easily flowed whereas with Kit & Mischa, it didn't. I needed someone to kick the bucket, and Taylan became the obvious choice. I abandoned the Kit/Mischa story and knitted it throughout here, told from Mitchell's and Tom's pov. And suddenly that worked. I gained way more material than I could've used for two separate stories. I easily wrote half of the whole thing in a week. If something gives you a headache, it's telling you you're on the wrong track. 😉
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Ugh, tell me about it. When 20, tight in all the right places and nimble. 30 years later, you're getting up with subtitles. *Groan* *moan*
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A big one, for me. As chapters go, I usually write more scene-style, like in tv-episodes. Well, this was a big scene, nice and meaty. The next one will be rather small. But you'll get to go into the psyche of both of these guys, see what makes em tick. Enjoy! 🙃
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--==Mitchell’s POV==-- Tom dug into his meal with relish, savoring the salmon. “This is very good,” he commented, taking a sip from his wine, “great choice.” “Thank you. Glad you like it.” “Still collecting fine wine?” he inquired, nodding to his glass. Confirming that with a nod of my own, I also noticed that he alternated between the wine and water. Responsible drinker? “Yes.” “Still a wannabe connoisseur, huh? That drove Taylan up the wall, I remember.” Peopl
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3 more hours, and then...😈
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Oh, it's a doozy. 😈
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This story is definitely more meaty for these two. You'll find out lots of stuff in the coming chapters. I do feel I have to mention that so far, I've posted without edits/beta reading. Some changes might occur, once those come in. I'll mention that, then.
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Aww, thank you. A follow-up story was in the cards for a while, I did have an idea for it but it never came to fruition. That was years ago, though and it wasn't really enough to fill 5 pages. But one never knows.
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You should! I'll indeed post another one. 😃
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--==Mitchell’s POV==-- Our host took us to a somewhat secluded spot in a corner, hidden away behind some big plants and once we were seated, handed us menus. “I’ll be right back to take your order. Would you like another drink?” “Do you have a wine list?” Tom asked her. From the small stack in her arm she handed him one. “And a pitcher of water, please. Thanks.” When she left, he took another sip of his drink, and then looked at me over the rim of his glass. “So how are we
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The next one will come in some 6 hours from now, when I return home from nightshift. 😁 Then we're gonna go delve into some minds. Reveal things...
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Lots of 'splainin' upcoming, lol!
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Ahhhhhhh! I understand! My bad! 😂
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Thank you! You have no idea how much fun I'm having with these characters, especially giving them the depth they deserve. I just hope everyone enjoys reading it as much as I do writing it. Then it's goal accomplished. 😀
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I know, right! Re-read it for stuff I needed in Part III, references and such? It had me cringing at times. I dunno where my head was at, in 2011 (wow, 12 years ago!) but he's pretty one-dimensional. Which if why I'm writing Part III. I was looking for some that needed redeeming, and Mitchell definitely was one of them.
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I know; he was a favorite. But you just wait and see. 🙃
