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Dragons I love. Just how young is year-eight? Such a tender tale. Enjoyable. Do you have more of these dragon tales?

So they took the original "too sensitive" boy to the world of fairies. It took me some time to figure out the meaning of changling. I liked this story. Where the boy and the girl fading to the wall the chosts? Reall fine, but not the quickie you'd expect!

Hmmm... interesting. I'm bad with poems, this was ugly beautiful, I guess. It doesn't have to pe pretty to exist and stand tall. Just like your bastard boy in the poem. Made any sence?

Taking responsibility for your actions and looking yourself in the mirror every once in a while is so healthy when you are in a relationship. Really important message I think, to be both selfish enough to know what is good for you and not let other people run you over (Rodney) and learning to make compromises the way both can be happy. It's a tricky thing to fallow through in real life. This shorty shows again that you can play with variable themes really well and keep it interesting and still show your signature style. I love the protagonist's voice, so blind to his own faults. And yet so moving in his innocence. I really liked the ending.

I'm not expert with poetry, but I know when I see something beautiful. Tiger, your poem is soo beautiful and in the midway I knew it would have a bittersweet ending like life itself. I'll hold on to this poem in my memory as the first poem I have ever read in GA and the first one in way long time I actually have enjoyed. I will read more poems and stories form you!

How is that kind of business in running still? They are delivers for heaven's sake. Nice to hear this side of the surrogate motherhood, I'd never joke about the nanny thing, lol, must have had you two paps craping in your pants! Sorry. It was a joke from her side, right? A nasty joke, but still a joke, right ?

Oh.... I wish I was there, sounds like you trully had the best time ever! I'm considering possibilities to join the UK meet in august. I'd really love to meet you people! And especially you, Neph! Hope your back is doing better!

I'm soo happy for you! You do amazing work here helping everyone and you are too cool to be true with your stories . :worship:

I'm dancing a happy dance around my apartment for you hon! You really deserved to be hosted. Sweet, caring, funny and an amazing storyteller. :worship:

I don't see anyone here screaming for the averige lenght. Just follow your own instinct when to end a chapter. If a chappy is forced to end or prolonged somehow, it shows.

Sweet Southern story! I think it was so cute with the names, especially wit Hysterically Grazy, how on earth did you come up with those. Well If I wonder around semeteries in Finland I see names that sound really weird today like Impi Aina Ilona = in English: Virgin Joy Forever".Tad's crush in the photo was really sweet and getting the boy of his dreams to his rock was so heartwarming. His bravery really stands out and I'm really interested to see if it transfers to Andrew too. Love the auntie!I had some troubles following the pov at times when it jumped from first person to third, but I got over it quick.This first chapter was really well organised and works also as independent story. That makes me nervous of what is ahead for the boys, it was just so perfectly wrapped already that I would have wanted to leave it there. Not gonna stop reading! Wanna see what kinda adventures the boyz find themselves! Very good job! Like this!

Hello Jdare123! Welcome to GA! This is a good site to post your stories, friendly place. I'd be happy to read your stories. And happy to hear your thoughts in discussions too If you and the rest of the peeps are not happy/able or willing to discuss their stories irl, we have a friendly enviroment here.

This is a story that really can't be reviewed. So I'm just gonna say *hugs*. Let's take care of eachother. And learn to see the person next to us. Being invisible isn't magical. Thank you for this story.

Heart of the matter really is, respect others and respect yourself, in both sides of the line. Authors can be the best and the worst critics to other authors.Thanks Comsie for this and other recent "author tools"

Wooot? This was a joke, really? :DDDDDDDDDD"I love you Paula.""It's Peter.""Whatever."lolI love you!!!!!

I'm gonna be really boring and say I wouldn't change a thing. I was holding back to post my aswer to give myself some time to really think about the answer. There are plenty of things I wish I'd done differently or left un done, of mny things. BUT those things I still carry with me, they are the things, moments and people in my life that have helped me to become the me I am know. So, all the scars and hurts I have caused to others, I feel sorry too, but I feel I have learned from those situations too.

This was actually one of the first short stories I have read in a long while and proved to me that a story doesn't have to be long to be emotionaly satisfying. After this i read all Comsie's shorties in a row.

Individual charisma, it's different with every single person. Some appeal to me some don't. It has nothing to do with looks. There are so many things in persons appearance that can be a turn on -or turn off.

Well now that you reminded me of Shakespeare's Buck, I can see his character developing even more. And all names of this story are so pretty! Well, Buck's not a pretty name but it holds the references as you said. Amberly and Kismet, well, sigh...I love open endings, as long as there is promise with the continuity! *grins hapily*

The end is really a puzzle. I like this because it rises up more questions than answers, but I wuold really really like some answers too! The story has am amazing flow in it and being trapped in situations one can not affect must be horrible. And Bucks being so stoic about it is unbelievable. I want more of Buck. Did you know that Kismet is a Finnish chocolate... It is advertised with a phrase "so good, you can't even say it".

Gonna read this chappy in train back home amongs others! Jej! Can't wait!

Btw. Are you entering to the People Are Strange -Anthology?

Toothpaste!!!!!!!!!! This is gonna be a real ride, my stomach is cramping from all the laughs. I love the boys' horseplay! I'd just die if I was Peter! Or not, *blushes again*

Well it got much more innovative than I expected, **blushes** Marking pen, oh gosh... You are killing me!

The theme of speedos and tickling continues **flexes her fingers with a devilish smile**Double the trouble... I can see it forming up!