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  1. Philippe

    Chapter 20

    Oh, I thought they’d just get sent for special handling with a catholic priest.
  2. Philippe

    Chapter 13

    I’m not so sure if it’s not much the same for both. Davin is depressed that he doesn’t have his own family and/or they don’t care. Joel is heartbroken that he is unwanted and he no longer has his family. Davin wanting to leave the sanitarium is not unexpected, but as teens often express leaving town is the only way. It seems to be more than just the sanitarium, it seems to be a more underlying frustration; getting away from his crush, Cole, or just that he can’t easily see being with a boyfriend in his current mindset for the ranch life. it remains to be seen whether Joel is going to connect to the extent that he starts to accept that he’s basically a Connelly if he so choses… I think Joel does need the love and support of family…more than just a boyfriend, but accepted within a family clan that shares.
  3. Philippe

    Chapter 13

    Understandable as we tend towards comfort and that’s what soothes you or makes you feels better. Growing up my dad was the worst for tolerating anything other than country. Like merle Haggard, Loretta Lynn, Hank Williams…senior, and such. He would consider anything much other as radical noise and turn it off or tell you with no room for questions to turn that #&*$ off now.
  4. The cruel reality that some people are a threat to society. The rights of one to do harm should never be allowed to trump the rights of others living normal lives. Claude was a menace to society and could have been stopped at so many points along his path in life. He paid the ultimate price for no one making a proper effort to stem his conduct, that evidently play into the retribution he suffered. But he stalked and tormented up until the end. He chose to ride the bus, he chose to harass the boys all the way to their homes, he chose his own path knowing he was wrong but that no one could stop his fun. Murder is wrong, but it’s hard to feel any remorse that all for Claude. In fact, during his murder, hopefully temporal distortion allowed Claude to see the error in his actions and judgment, as he saw the axe moving in slow motion towards his forehead; perhaps in that brief moment, his soul may have had a chance to regret his own choices towards fratricide.
  5. Philippe

    Chapter 13

    Dare you not! PLEASE! Retirement is not something I would want to see you do. Hopefully that was spoken totally in jest, but if tickling thoughts are there then I hope you find a different solution to ease your stress than tossing your storytelling gifts and your presence here in the community. i too keep getting the comment locks, or inability to submit. I think it may be linked to my time responding…so I copy the comment attempted, refresh the page, then Quote and paste anew. 🤣 It is frustrating for sure.
  6. Philippe

    Chapter 13

    No Krista, Pink Floyd’s, The Wall Album, where they get the the raging breaking of TV, glass, etc. 😂
  7. Philippe

    Chapter 13

    Makes you wonder how they came about being; are the twins orphaned from a dead sibling or something? That house is so sterile it couldn’t have been the parents bumping uglies in pristine linens. 😳 Oh, they could be test tube babies…raised by nannies?? 🙃
  8. Philippe

    Chapter 13

    Perhaps a loudspeaker blasting The Wall, Momma, in full view of that garage spy cam, as they toss those vases out to match the crashes within the album. Then let them see the spray paint selection as you try out some colors on all those wonderfully blank canvas…known as plain white walls. 🤣 😈
  9. Philippe

    Chapter 13

    I had to change from sad emoji to angry emoji; that shit is fukd up. That’s like being forced to live as an obsessive compulsive person, when the real OCD ones don’t even stay there. OMG, Joel has Davin ready to face the music, just to get Joel’s story. Ironically, it seems both want it to happen but they both need a little incentive to test the waters. Gavin keeps it simple he doesn’t let it get to him as easily…but then again, he’s the one that bail quickly; does that happen often? What a mess. Gavin expected to return the Trace/Celia’s as apparently it’s more like home. Davin takes it more personal as he knows they’re welcome, but he knows it shouldn’t be that way; yet, he has to see a good functioning family to avoid his isolation loneliness. 🤦‍♂️ I have a feeling Davin is committed to this press-to-test challenge, however, the surprise maybe thwarted if Gavin returns there vs the Connelly Ranch; Davin what the heck, do you want Cruella Deville to kill all the pups to afford extra cleaning crews to clean up that mess? 🤷‍♂️ 😮
  10. Philippe

    Chapter 20

    Oh goodness, the unexpected visitors at shower time. 🤦‍♂️ My college roommate hardly came by our place after becoming very involved with his girlfriend; if he did, it was usually mornings. My new friend of which seemed to have interest had come over from a just a little shared time while catching a bite before studying. Sexual puns and innuendo were becoming more frequent between us, until he confessed an old friend group growing up had a circle jerk at times. I was surprised but rather inquisitive. He took that as an all clear and confessed it wasn’t always just jerking off, as he had sucked off some of them. Soon we shared a math problem; only to find taking away 2 from 69 equals…a mess possible mess as being new, did you swallow, did you dribble, or just help the partner feel those strokes by new hands. 🤔. So while showering and laughing a bit about studying hard, all of a sudden the stereo turned on, loudly, in the living room. 😬 Well hell, never say never as that evening the roommate dropped by to pick up some things, only a find…rub-a-dub-dub two guys in my tub. 🤦‍♂️ With an awkward exit from the bath I spoke casually about good to see him. Are you and the girlfriend doing ok? are you staying the night today? He was somewhat distracted as he was still sure the other voice would soon have a face. He told others and rumors and harassment started, and kept getting worse. The new fwb and I got a duplex apartment shortly after that. Ironically, his girlfriend turned wife’s brother turns out to be gay and yet the awkwardness of that afternoon still haunts us. We had good times and so much in common back then, and even had very similar careers. Yet, while staying in touch casually, we’re not the friends we would have been and/or remained had that overreaction and disclosure not have happened…to his roommate/friend. So being door checked after showering with a boyfriend is certainly not for unexpected guests.
  11. Philippe

    Chapter 20

    Nor did he try to barge in past JJ as his little strategically timed opportunity to try an reclaim his oppressive dad title. Oh dear officers, my hand must have inadvertently hit that panic button. But thanks for your timely arrival, as Mr P here may need help seeing his way out after his unscheduled and unwanted visit with the guardian parent away.
  12. Renato could have stepped in, but only to give his life for his kind and his one true King. I wished there had been a ancient provision that allowed a protector to deny the appointment but that also stipulated the Lord would not get to name another as he intentionally choose a champion breaking the Royal Codes of Honor. Oh yes, powers returning and Kingdom being restored.
  13. Treat them to stakes, one for mom, another for Lord Valerius as he loves bloody stakes …just not to the heart, until now. Then again Let him suffer the fate he was to impose in his arrogance against others; but as said before striped of all powers and can only survive on the tainted blood of Mommy Dearest.
  14. Yes! Valerius and Dear Mother, neutered and spade, then banished while stripped of all powers. Valerius dependent and unable to survive on none other than the tainted blood he helped to embitter, Dear Mother. While she the all powerful blood bag, finds no will to resist the feeding that forces her and Valerius to share seeing, and suffer the pains of the ones wronged; living replays of all the worst crimes they collectively committed against those less greedy. Term of total servitude…until reformed, then both become human for however long they shall live. Just a thought… pay back, bitches.
  15. Philippe

    Chapter 12

    Oh god, inviting Cindzilla to be your monster-in-law? NO THANKS. We elope, run away,…never look back; at least as far as she is concerned, 😳
  16. Philippe

    Chapter 12

    That my man is growing up and becoming wiser…so that you’re the one beginning to say; Do as I say, not as I do. 😂
  17. Philippe

    Chapter 12

    It’s hard to bare one’s soul when it’s been abused/violated by someone that should have been trustworthy,..yet they stab you in the back and then shun you. The old military expression of frustration when some required drills to practice muscle memory, or practice nose bleeds as we called it; Thank You, Sir! May I Have Another!!
  18. ML not involved with a macho acting boy? Oops, she missed one,…or he had no dick; which could drive him psycho, so there’s that toward psychoanalysis. See, ML is a teen boy psychotherapist; specializing in anti-DSB treatments.
  19. Nah the cancer he has Is mental and destructive; so embedded that rehabilitation was probably unlikely even had he survived.
  20. But I’m hoping that more truth and support will come it, both at school and as witnesses of fact.
  21. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    Ok everyone, hands up.. and hang on!
  22. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    Mr G is in a tough spot; if he advocates then he’s part of the problem, if he stays he can still help boys through these years but perhaps including privacy and discretion…great discretion due to the Karens of their environment. If he discloses too much to the boys, then it could dampen the success of surviving either plan. He is attached, I feel he is hurting too. The condoms and quick “father” talk as well as speaking to Nick’s mom of the talk shows caring well beyond his dorm guardian scope. Could there be outside ties to the community? Self? Family? Friends? Or any of those lost to AIDS. From the generation of the Gay Plague being first diagnosed, then Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell, I lost friends and acquaintances to AIDS myself; and didn’t fully understand even then, how fortunate I had been to not have been infected by an STD…which became Sexually Transmitted Death vs Disease. So the boys get to live their social studies lessons vs reading about other cases. I hope to see the students stand…or sit, United; getting more parents involved to offset the Karens is a start. That will likewise speak to the coffers but bigger than that, a school of its renown has to have a parent in news, lawyers, and pediatricians/doctors that can dispel the cries of unhealthy. Whereas, these policies themselves are more harmful to development and mental health. 🤦‍♂️
  23. Philippe

    Chapter 19

    Nah, Timmy will be over behind the bushes giving BJs. 😬
  24. Philippe

    Chapter 12

    I look back and see things I did in my younger years, particularly during college, as I had a full credit load of engineering classes. already working to pay my own way, but I still decided to also add flying into my college goals. So work was sometimes 33-52 hours a week, on top of classes/labs, and flying lesson 2-3 times a week. I felt as if I was literally meeting myself coming and going on 4-5 hours rest. I was one whipped puppy…but the drive to reach my goal kept me well and able to cross the finish line. Do I ever want to do that again? NO! But if I was to get a do over, would I change anything? NO! I’m so happy you get to claim a victory that makes you happy to have that accomplishment to your name; that’s not an easy task, nor one that many can do with true storytelling skills; then to bare your work and soul to public scrutiny, wow. 🤯 That’s back to feeling like a teenager not wanting to try something with others to witness.. 😱
  25. Philippe

    Chapter 12

    Despite frustrations that you may have been experiencing in that long period, you hung in there and gave a great story the ending it deserved. Too often it seems the authors lose their drive or will to continue. They won’t totally abandon it, but only give it a rapid, inconsistent, ending with loose ends; a final chapter with little depth that seems as if another author stepped in to give it an ending. The Best Year is classic to me. You captured a year that to many seems to move rapidly on one hand, yet happens at a time in life where there are so many things and events we later recall; milestones towards transitioning to mature adults, emotionally and intellectually, dare I say becoming self aware and starting to find their on way in life. The characters were so very real and we got to see the maturing and transitioning as it happened, the good and the bad; in a very real fashion. But we also got a taste for parents transitioning from nurturing kids to encouraging or accepting that those kids were becoming adults…with their own life and decisions. Again, I think it is a classic coming of age story, beyond the typical quick summary events that often narrow the portrayed coming out or finding love.
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