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Could it be Jake, the same Jake that’s in it too deep? Could he have pretended to be Paul’s beau or even possibly been the real thing…but then got snared into nefarious dealings with Fenton Black? Why was Jake so paranoid that he was hyper aware that Killian was following him? Is that picture of Jake’s really a picture of a love relationship, or is it a sort of evidence that Jake had to sneakily have made of him with this notorious Fenton Black,
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Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
Philippe commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
you’re warm and cuddly, where’s that wolf?- 25 comments
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Chapter 9 - Random Madness
Philippe commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Random Madness
Both Kris and Dean have some soul searching to do; not uncommon at their ages in life. How much of the parents’ burden, memories, and life to consider in your own life. Do you agreed and honor in a blatant mimic or do you think more figuratively as if they would have been in your shoes vs you in their shoes. Only one person is able to make that decision of what you want, and they stand in the mirror. -
AC leave a bread trail that triggers an international crisis….nah.
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On the personal level, this is not for the greater good directly, it is a matter of protecting family and survival. Though Silas says resign and step away….so we can quietly do away with you and your family. The former PM died because of his existence in support of anything other than demanded support, and compliance. So I would argue there is no safe exits other than taking control back from non-democratic radicals. The irony is that even in democracy a moral judge is still necessary, but must support the people and not the corrupt power seekers.
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He needed to draw him out, plus Silas just confirmed beyond any reasonable doubt that he is indeed the action man but, like Father, hiding across international borders while he sends in attacks masked as domestic.i just hope the whole network of traitors is exposed and removed from any government agency or positions…other than maybe an exchange park ranger position in the Louisiana swamps, they have unlimited positions to fill.
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Only in their private way of communicating what is understood or last option.
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Silas, so arrogant, so ruthless, yet speaking out with claim of moral authority for the fall of democracy; what a POS.
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Having grown up before the internet teachings and lure, I was a virgin until half way through senior year. The interactions with others seemed to imply more towards long term relationships that I wasn’t looking for, at least with the people that showed interest back towards me. Even in college the pacing was slow but an intense build. My roommate and love in college senior year was my roommate as we had found each other at the end of junior year. We slept together and had sex regularly…nightly if not more, but it was more oral than anything else. The anal play was again before internet learning and feeling comfortable about taking our relationship to that type of sex. But we were very happy with our very active sex lives and we did progress to anal too, butt oral was still our most common play. My point being, the internet influencers are not a part of this small town and more rural story. I think the pace is slow but reflective of the environment. Actually, in real life they might not have discovered each other as quickly…as saying what you think, you hope, you want, is terrifyingly difficult as it’s a big exposure of something so personal and so new to you. Therefore, the pacing is a slow rate when reading compared to the more common erotica one might expect, but I think you’re nailing it. Otherwise, there’d be probable little Colts, Gavins, and such as the actions would be outpacing the life lessons of the more rare volunteers for teen parenting. Did you hear about Mike and Rebecca…Debbie says Linda told Jimmy that Rebecca is very late, like she’s likely pregnant. 😬
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Perhaps Trace grabbing someone by the scruff would have a great affect on the Fletcher crowd; message sent, he is one of us and is not to be messed with.
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Hmmm 🤔, two people to invite….Roy and his sister! Roy’s sister keeps Roy in check and Roy has shown some restraint so far anyway, so he is more leaning on Joel than Joel for Roy and Roy has many opportunities for questions he hasn’t asked thus far. Honestly, I’ve been thinking Roy actually likes Joel that way….like, the like like kinda way that scares the crap out of him but…
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Jackson was better than you make him sound; perhaps he was just trying to get Luke to love him as his puppy. 🐶
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Well for all his frustrations, Jake has failed to look in the mirror. He just as easily could have asked Killian what’s going on. He’s saying no one cares, then says caring won’t change anything; so yes, maybe a bit of depression and as @RichardWritessays survivor’s guilt. He lost everything and everyone but was angry at the very person he could depend on, Aunt Judy. Now he’s in to deep, and it’s all Aunt Judy and Killian’s fault. Jake mirror, mirror Jake, get to know each other!
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Power To Shock Dogs 🐕 Ouch; I feel that must be how it is with kidney stones. Yikes 😳 I put a Panansonic Key Locatot on my cat’s harness for when he goes out with me; it plays a tone when located that gets quicker and louder with proximity. Without training, he usually comes out of the bushes or from under vehicles to come to me when he hears it; no shocks needed…yet.
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Even though he is just my neighbor boy by relationship, he spends A LOT of time visiting me. I have to remind him he should ring the doorbell or at least announce himself as he walks in. 🤦♂️ I’ve even been awakened in my bed as he stands there asking if I’m getting up now. Tonight he came back over after dinner just to play games on the phone while laying next to me reading. He can be a radical random vector at times, but he can also be very helpful and precious when he wants. Many places I go, people think he’s my grandson and ask where he is when not with me. 😆 Yes, I like when he wants to help me or go with me on supply runs. I miss him when he’s not around, but time is still on my side for now; he’s 9yo.
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That’s another reason to hate all this digital migration; it’s just not as believable to say the dog ate your hard drive or erased your cloud storage.
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Except for Jane finally being given review and assumed KIA; but Sarah now becomes the wanted, hunted prey that is long overdue. Too bad Sarah has the intel and custody of Ned/Edward, but at least it’s finally out there in the open now; Sarah is the treasonous, murdering, and spy within.
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Cinquième partie : Le Poisson
Philippe commented on W_L's story chapter in Cinquième partie : Le Poisson
Well, with that explanation…or better yet, that reflection on real life, you perfectly nailed the imperfection; now please get Reese back to coaching Dexter to be the better man within…no pun intended. -
Cinquième partie : Le Poisson
Philippe commented on W_L's story chapter in Cinquième partie : Le Poisson
Hopefully he has regrets of the extra pills he took. One is supposed to migrate towards to other but it’s the low man bringing the healthy one down vs trying to meet him and be better. -
Given how the first introduction then first team meet went and the skipped request for Joel to see him, I think the coach has probably had his eyes opened as to seeing Joel as more than a regular student. Does the coach have the drive and compassion to see Joel needing help? If the coach is all about numbers and wins, then he’s lost Joel, but if he’s about helping boys learn and love the game, the sportsmanship, and while developing team/community skills then he may have his chance. Approach with care and learn what Joel needs and wants; deep down, not the jerseys, but the connection and his drive. The last coach may have been great, but we don’t see much evidence that he knew Joel beyond the team leader. Where was the depth of knowing the boy and what made him tick? Will teens talk to you, not unless you show convincing interest in helping them.
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It’s rather common for many parents to allow siblings to invite a few guests to their sibling’s birthday party. So given that the twins are family; Gavin, Davin, Colt, and well meaning but slightly mischievous Celia could be inviting…maroon team members. Celia would invite a parent that happens to have a kid on the team, that would naturally be parent invited (even pushed if necessary). Could that parent also be the coach? 🤣 😈 😇
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As long as it’s just…a toy bus. 😊
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Troisième partie : Les Œufs
Philippe commented on W_L's story chapter in Troisième partie : Les Œufs
Wow, I don’t know if his ex did the number on him or he drove himself into his depression but young Reese seems to be a magnet pulling Dexter from the pit of his despair. -
Like IKEA instructions in pictorials: Option 1; Insert Tab A in to Slot B, use pressure as necessary to fully drive Tab A into the slot until the mating surfaces are fully pressed and held together firmly. Option 2; Insert Tab B in to Slot A, apply pressure and check mating surfaces held firmly together as applied in Option 1.
